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"See! The winter is past; the rains are over and gone. Flowers appear on the earth; the season of singing has come, the cooing of doves is heard in our land." Song of Songs 2:11-12 __________________________ All of nature is coming back to life, baby birds squeak and flowers are blooming; we have no more worries of winters knife, the tulips and violets are bloomin'. With gentle breezes the Lord sends his breath, he smiles and his bright sun reaches our earth; trees in hues where once they were bare as death, a mother rabbit has just given birth. Bees buzzing, robins, hummers' and blue skies, the Lords has painted this earth with his brush; slowly, dripping paint on the butterflies, next he paints the flowers vibrant and lush. Open the windows and go for a walk; wander a path and find a pretty rock ! ___________________________________ February 24, 2021 - Reprint, April 20, 2021 Poetry/Sonnet/The Lord's Breath Copyright Protected, ID 04-1348-301-20 Reprint All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Submitted into the contest, Your Best Sonnet This Year so Far sponsor, John Hamilton, Judged 04/23/2021 Third Place

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Date: 4/29/2021 5:03:00 PM
I love this. God bless you, Constance. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/30/2021 7:42:00 AM
Gina, thank you for the compliment, peace _Constance
Date: 4/25/2021 1:25:00 PM
WoW! BW, What a lovely spring sonnet. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/25/2021 2:37:00 PM
Alexis, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations, love _Constance
Date: 4/24/2021 8:01:00 PM
I felt that after reading your poem, this where I want to be. Congratulations Constance!
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Date: 4/25/2021 1:03:00 PM
George, thanks for the comment and the congratulations, love _Constance
Date: 4/23/2021 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love spring and I love this write. "Beautiful" Your line, "Bees buzzing, robins, hummers' and blue skies," Yes, spring is here. Have a blessed day/weekend..........................
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Date: 4/23/2021 2:41:00 PM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and compliment, I like that line too, love _Constance
Date: 4/23/2021 10:27:00 AM
This is very good Constance, I especially loved the spiritual tone you give to spring, congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/23/2021 2:42:00 PM
John, thank you for the contest and my placement, and for the comment and congrats, appreciate, love _Constance
Date: 4/20/2021 12:41:00 PM
Constance, this one is top of the mark. Sonnets are not always as easy as you make them seem. Good stuff!
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Date: 4/20/2021 4:34:00 PM
Milt, thank you for the compliment, I do not write many, but think I will in the future, I like how they feel, love _Constance
Date: 4/20/2021 10:42:00 AM
I must say I have a few pet rocks I have collected over the years. I loved your line “ With gentle breezes the Lord sends his breath,”. This is a real beauty Constance. I think John will think so too. Sonnets are becoming my favorite form. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/20/2021 11:09:00 AM
Connie, thank you for your very nice comment, I do not write a lot of sonnets but I should because I always like the result, love _Constance

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