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THE LORD IS MY MUSE

THE LORD IS MY MUSE* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The Lord is my muse; I shall not despair. He giveth me inspiration; he leadeth me to magical waters. He restoreth my creativity; he float-eth ideas in my mind, for poetry’s sake. Although I write in the early morning hours and darkness of night, I will remain tireless; for thou art with me; thy energy and enthusiasm comfort me. We traverse the night together, endlessly seeking the stars. Thou anointest me with metaphors, rhymes, and alliterations; my imagination runneth over. Surely effortlessly flowing words shall follow me all the days of my life; and I will write in the house of His spirit forever. *Note: This poem was written for a 2024 Poetry Soup contest in which entrants were to adapt Psalm 23 for writers. My intent, therefore, was not to plagiarize the Bible.
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Gauthier Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 6:58 PM
Well crafted, Sara ~ enjoyed your poem
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 5:16 PM
thank you, sincerely :-)
Delaney Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 5:35 PM
A can see your pen was under his guidance, Sara Lovely words that echo the Lord's Prayer.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 5:43 PM
what a wonderful comment, Suzanne! Thank you...have a blessed evening, Sara
Velasco Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 2:54 PM
This is a beautiful and reverent adaptation, Sara! You’ve stayed true to the tone and cadence of Psalm 23 while weaving in the writer’s journey with grace and creativity.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 5:22 PM
thank you, Rowena. Your comments mean a great deal to me. Wishing you a blessed evening, Sara
DiMino Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 5:48 AM
Beautiful! Once you let Him in, He is always with you. Never sleeps, never goes anywhere, alert to comfort and provide. Lovely, spiritual write! Blessings my friend.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 5:22 PM
thanks for visiting, Joe, and for your timely and appropriate comments. have a blessed evening, Sara
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