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The Loose Connection

So much is lost in time. Words are taken in the wrong meaning. Soon te bridge is but a scar of memory. Sweet moments but a fargone reflection none of which I choose to recall. the laughter stale as the beer in this smoke filled room. Music heals but stabs us deep. Cents for the pain. Numbers the tune. Her body is there but not for anyone to truley know. the backward thougts with forward visions. The emptyness my home hollow in the aftreglow. My return is long overdue and to soon my exit. A thief of emotion that exist only within my pen. Has it been lost all over agian?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/29/2010 11:15:00 AM
John, words do leave scars, that's for sure. You have a very astute observation here, and the last line sums it up so well! Your poem is heded to my favorites. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/29/2010 10:24:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...I especially like the opening three lines..Sara
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Date: 9/28/2010 1:26:00 PM
well expressed thoughts nicely worded on The Loose connection, john
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Date: 9/28/2010 11:10:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today John. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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