The Long-Suffering Wife

Believing that marriage was ordained of God; 
that, like a seed, it needed constant nurturing, 
she sowed her deep devotion with a hope 
that stretched beyond an ordinary scope. 
That hope scanned schisms that had left her desolate-
until it reached the heavens with her prayers.

Time and time again, her spouse complained or failed to do small things
essential to cementing the marriage bond.
With unusual restraint, she held her tongue, forgave. . . and listened.
If matrimony were the fire in a hearth, she supplied the kindling and the logs;
then lauded him for twigs that on occasion he tossed in. 
Some nights she’d lay a weary head upon the chest 
of the one she called her husband (when he was fast asleep and didn’t know). 
In those moments, she felt the beat of that heart he never showed to her.

With humbleness she supplicated God 
that she might find connection with her mate.
She wondered and she wondered why. . .if thoughts, invisible, 
which were transmitted to the Lord, were able to be recieved by Him,
why could not her words, directly spoken to the one on earth she loved, be heard?

Daily on her knees, she telegraphed celestially with a faith most extraordinary. . . 
and wisdom came. Her love would not be broken, and she grew. 
The seed she’d planted took root too and grew until there came a time. . .
she laid a graying head upon the chest
of one that was her husband (not just in word only); 
a someone who now watched HER as she drifted off to sleep. 
With his heartbeat strong in her ear,
she heard him whisper softly, “I love you” as he kissed her cheek goodnight.


For Audrey Carey's "To Err Is Human to Forgive Divine"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Yvonne Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 4:00 AM
A sad write with a happy ending. Very touching, certainly a fav.
Tello Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 9:18 PM
Nice Poem, it shows how people can and will change evetually if enough effort is given. Congrats on the win!!!
Brown Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 11:25 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in "Annalise's Contest". Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 7:06 PM
how humane and endearing.. best cheers for the win andrea! :) nette
Radke Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations Andrea! This is most worthy of your winning position in the contest. Well done. Deb
Freeman Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your great third place poem. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 9:43 AM
Congrats Andrea on your wonderful win in Audrey's great contest with this excellent entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten with luv..
Richards Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 7:56 AM
A moving and heart wrenching poem, Andrea! Congratulations on a well deserved win! Love, Carrie
La France Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 6:45 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, with your win in Aydrey's contest with this excellent poetry~~
Mannan Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 6:19 AM
many congratulations dear Andrea for this win.
Mehta Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 6:13 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Audrey, Andrea
Neels Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 2:03 AM
So happy to see this one amongst the winners Andrea! Congratulations ;-) love Wilma
Villarosa Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 12:48 AM
A very well deserved win, Andrea. Congratulations. (^_^) Noel.
Johnson Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 9:36 PM
This is a beautiful story Andrea. congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
Devonshire Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 7:35 PM
Very touching, Andrea. Congratulations on your win!
Haick Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 7:24 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Andrea! Congratulations! Love, Audrey
Radke Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 11:35 PM
Andrea -- we were indeed channeling the same spirit in these poems I love the words you use, how you tell the story. very good. love Deb
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December 22, 2010 at 4:18 AM
omg this is amazing. it made me sad and it made me happy and it made me want to fall in love ;) awesome poem
Babcock Avatar
December 21, 2010 at 8:05 PM
Now I am in tears again. Life is so short that we fail to realize that in a minute it could be gone. We have to say I love you more often and learn not to hold a grudge. Faith, hope and love never left her. AWESOME. love Phyl
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December 21, 2010 at 1:48 PM
OMG Andrea this made tears fall it was terrific.Please have a joyus Christmas holiday with your mom.I sure miss mine.Thanks for those so sweet and kind comments.Have a very Merry Christmas from your friend Teresa
Chachere Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 4:22 PM
she heard the beat of that heart he never showed to her.sounds so deep.it really does. it was almost like he didn't even realize her suffering words unspoken until the very end. .which was a beautiful ending by the way. a favorite on my list for sure. ~Always&Forever Lynette
Wilson Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 3:26 PM
What a beautiful commentary on faith and hope in love..persistence of the heart..Best of luck Andrea with this definite winner..take care~Deb
Quintero Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 3:16 PM
Exceptionally beautiful. What a lovely portrayal of steadfastness, hope and forgiveness. Prayers answered. Thanks for sharing. ~ Jodie Q
Mehta Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 11:38 AM
To err is human, but to persist is devilish and to forgive it needs a godlike heart, Andrea
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December 20, 2010 at 9:20 AM
Ow my,you hit the hammer on the head sweet Andrea. .beautiful ending. .So much emotions in this outsdanding poem. .tmfvs of fvs. .hugs. .im busy this week,miss our chats..how are you?hugs
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