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The Long Night

Sitting by the fire, back to the darkness. Soft flames highlight his face, staring into the night. The high cheeks, the deep eyes, with lips grey, and stone-like. Later, the glowing coals show his face, calm, resolved. Sculptured and statuesque, of one who's seen the light! 2/3/2021

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Date: 2/5/2021 3:53:00 PM
Meru, congratulations on your win in Brian's All Yours contest with this excellent poem, well done _Constance
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Meru Groen
Date: 2/15/2021 10:23:00 AM
Thank you, Constance, your comment is so kind, and I love your name!
Date: 2/4/2021 3:13:00 AM
Perhaps his memories brought him a modicum of peace, or did he find it in prayer?
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Meru Groen
Date: 2/4/2021 12:40:00 PM
He struggled with it all night, finally figured it out, and put it in place. Thank you for your interest, Jenna, your so kind.

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