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The Lonely Park

Oh I see, The lights are ready to spark anytime, despite the severe darkness. The benches are ready to bear people on it anytime and everytime, despite utter emptiness. The road is awaiting for all the creatures to crawl and walk upon it, despite facing loneliness. The water is ready to reflect everything and anything around it, despite the ugliness. 28-6-2020 Placed as Honorable Mention. Note:Enter the 'STRAND completely new (2) any theme any form' Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2020 5:49:00 AM

The park is "always ready" - a great tribute to every park.

V. Deepa
Date: 7/3/2020 12:56:00 PM

Hello Caren mam, Thanks for your gracious visit.:-) and your lovely review. Take care.With love~Deepa

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/1/2020 9:14:00 AM

Your words reflect true portrayal of realities we face these days Deepa. I hope the world gets better. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and lots of love :)

V. Deepa
Date: 7/1/2020 11:18:00 AM

Hello Aditi mam, Thankyou for the lovely appreciation and blessings.:-) Yes, just targetted one spot to showcase today's plight. Let's pray for this situation to turn normal.Take care. Much love:-)~Deepa