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The Lonely Forge

“I’m gonna…i’m gonna lose it…” 
                — by the Poet

THE LONELY FORGE

who are the brave, those who begin
again and again—  their muscles
engage like a sputtering automobile.
small hills, like a mountain climb.
no one cheers them on in their insanity.
the lonely forge ahead, forgotten hacks.*

11/12/2021
BITE SIZE POEM no26 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

*inexperienced, in this case in exercise
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Gaul Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Fearless you forge ahead Kim. I am with you. Congrats.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 1:50 PM
Thank you, Greg! Let us forge ahead!
Peck Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 9:16 AM
Got to keep old age at bay :) Keep moving, the best advice! Congratulations
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 1:49 PM
Yes…true!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write and picture. Yes, go forward. Have a blessed day...............
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 1:49 PM
Thanks, Paula! …….
Agustin Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 11:24 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... propping... propelling... powering me to optimize Christ's strength for good. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 5:55 AM
Amen! ~ hugs, Beata!
Alex Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 10:29 PM
Real army. Great poem. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 5:55 AM
Thank you, dear poet!
Zahid Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 10:18 PM
Congratulations on your placement Kim, Blessings
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 5:55 AM
Thank you, Paghunda!
Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 9:24 PM
Charming poem, Kim ~ Congrats !
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 5:54 AM
Thank you, Line xx
Horne Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 6:59 AM
love this inspiring piece
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Thank you, Jack!
Karmakar Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 6:20 AM
Very much life-oriented in direction. Regards, sk
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:27 AM
:)
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 6:41 PM
As they say, back in the day: 'Climb every mountain; forge (!) every stream...' I know, I know, I know: It's supposed to be 'ford (!) every stream.' BUT what's a bit of 'forgery' between friends, eh?! lol. Happy Weekend, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 6:48 PM
Climb every reasonable mountain…lol!
Proxenos Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 12:18 PM
A thoughtful tribute to all who need encouragement. Lovely write. Hugs/ blessings Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, Jennifer! Your words are encouraging!
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 10:21 AM
oh my, That was sure creative, Kim!! Loved John's "hackarma" comment.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 6:49 PM
Thank you and yes, John’s comment was funny!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 1:26 AM
Lovely bitesize poem. You have a knack for them. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 5:50 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Lawless Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 2:07 PM
...welcome to the "hackarama" Kim. At least when we exercise alone the only one laughing at us.....is us...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 2:19 PM
LOL…thanks for making me laugh…that hill could be our marathon but no one is cheering us on :):)
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