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“I’m gonna…i’m gonna lose it…” — by the Poet THE LONELY FORGE who are the brave, those who begin again and again— their muscles engage like a sputtering automobile. small hills, like a mountain climb. no one cheers them on in their insanity. the lonely forge ahead, forgotten hacks.* 11/12/2021 BITE SIZE POEM no26 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier *inexperienced, in this case in exercise

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Date: 11/19/2021 1:47:00 PM
Fearless you forge ahead Kim. I am with you. Congrats.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2021 1:50:00 PM
Thank you, Greg! Let us forge ahead!
Date: 11/19/2021 9:16:00 AM
Got to keep old age at bay :) Keep moving, the best advice! Congratulations
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2021 1:49:00 PM
Yes…true!
Date: 11/19/2021 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write and picture. Yes, go forward. Have a blessed day...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2021 1:49:00 PM
Thanks, Paula! …….
Date: 11/18/2021 11:24:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... propping... propelling... powering me to optimize Christ's strength for good. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2021 5:55:00 AM
Amen! ~ hugs, Beata!
Date: 11/18/2021 10:29:00 PM
Real army. Great poem. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2021 5:55:00 AM
Thank you, dear poet!
Date: 11/18/2021 10:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement Kim, Blessings
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2021 5:55:00 AM
Thank you, Paghunda!
Date: 11/18/2021 9:24:00 PM
Charming poem, Kim ~ Congrats !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2021 5:54:00 AM
Thank you, Line xx
Date: 11/14/2021 6:59:00 AM
love this inspiring piece
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2021 8:27:00 AM
Thank you, Jack!
Date: 11/14/2021 6:20:00 AM
Very much life-oriented in direction. Regards, sk
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2021 8:27:00 AM
:)
Date: 11/13/2021 6:41:00 PM
As they say, back in the day: 'Climb every mountain; forge (!) every stream...' I know, I know, I know: It's supposed to be 'ford (!) every stream.' BUT what's a bit of 'forgery' between friends, eh?! lol. Happy Weekend, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 6:48:00 PM
Climb every reasonable mountain…lol!
Date: 11/13/2021 12:18:00 PM
A thoughtful tribute to all who need encouragement. Lovely write. Hugs/ blessings Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 6:49:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer! Your words are encouraging!
Date: 11/13/2021 10:21:00 AM
oh my, That was sure creative, Kim!! Loved John's "hackarma" comment.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 6:49:00 PM
Thank you and yes, John’s comment was funny!
Date: 11/13/2021 1:26:00 AM
Lovely bitesize poem. You have a knack for them. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2021 5:50:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 11/12/2021 2:07:00 PM
...welcome to the "hackarama" Kim. At least when we exercise alone the only one laughing at us.....is us...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2021 2:19:00 PM
LOL…thanks for making me laugh…that hill could be our marathon but no one is cheering us on :):)

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