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The Lonely Cloud

I wandered lonely as a cloud* to places far and wide I often thought it would be fun to rain down on a bride Or maybe on a summer Fete as rain is something people hate When dressed up in their finery they saunter in the sun chittering, chattering making small talk having so much fun Maypole dancers looking pretty dancing round and round Morris men they hop and skip with flowery hats and wooden poles As carefully they prance and dance big men like them don’t want to fall big men like them don’t want to trip All hot and sweaty they need a shower or would their smiles turn to a glower For I’d be doing them a favour Or maybe it would spoil their day On a hot and sunny day in May But I am getting really bored now Floating around and hanging about Naughty and mischievous These words describe just how I felt Oh dear ~ now is that mean of me As one, two, three I let one free My shower is scattering screeching crowds Soaking them through to their undies This weather not what one would expect on sunny summer Sundays They are now up to their knees in mud amusing the cows whilst chewing their cud Then just for fun a handful of hail stones can be rather painful from a height Crashing down upon their heads and giving all the gals a fright But enough is enough I hear you say So I return them to a sunny day I’ve had my fun I’ve had my thrills now wander lonely as a cloud* in search of golden daffodils… Written 1st February 2020 Contest: Famous poetic lines that inspire Sponsor: Silent One 2nd Place line taken from poem written by William Wordsworth* 'I wandered lonely as a cloud' Contest: Strand Select B Sponsor; Brian Strand HONORABLE MENTION

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Date: 2/13/2020 7:43:00 PM
Lovely imagery imagery, Ann. Delightful poem.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/14/2020 12:07:00 PM
I got a little carried away with this one, haha, but it seemed to work... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/6/2020 4:45:00 PM
Yahoo! Congratulations, Ann. Love, Panagiota
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2020 3:12:00 AM
hahaha, thank you sweet poet, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/5/2020 1:40:00 AM
This poem was delightful Ann. Perfect ending! Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2020 3:11:00 AM
Bless you dear Connie for your lovely comments, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/3/2020 7:10:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Ann :) - greetings from // Anne-Lise :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2020 3:10:00 AM
Bless you dear Anne-Lise, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/2/2020 12:09:00 PM
A great creative poem you have written Ann! Congratulations for your win :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2020 3:10:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Heidi for your lovely comment. I hope you are well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/2/2020 6:53:00 AM
Great personification Ann.. loved your take on the contest.. I hope you were a bright white cloud.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/2/2020 7:45:00 AM
Wow, thank you so much SO for my placement in your contest. My poem became more random as I got into it and I am so pleased you liked it SO. Oh yes I was definitely a bright white cloud, with a wicked sense of humour, haha... kindest thoughts Ann xx a
Date: 2/2/2020 5:38:00 AM
A poetic adventure throughout the changing weather under the watchfull eye of the lonely cloud! Extraordinary imagery dearest, Ann! xxx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/2/2020 6:18:00 AM
Thank you dear Demetrios for you lovely comments, yes my imagination did seem to go off on a tangent, haha.... always good to hear from you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/1/2020 4:28:00 PM
Any chance of coming over the man down the road when he's having a bonfire lol. Well written Ann, good luck Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/1/2020 4:42:00 PM
Hahaha, you make me laugh Tom. Glad you can see the humour in it! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/1/2020 4:04:00 PM
Much detail in your imagery brings the scenes alive--raining on the well dressed on a hot, sunny day! I liked the turn in the end as rain in the summer can come and go in a flash. The lonely cloud inspired you my friend. My very best for a win at the TOP.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/1/2020 4:32:00 PM
Thank so much dear Vijay, though I have just changed the title to The Lonely Cloud as I have not had many views yet and wondered if others are just not getting the my English humour. Then you came along dear friend and lifted my spirit - I thank you Vijay. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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