The lonely among us

Lonely hearts
Needing cheer
A smile a hug
Good company
Candid laughter
Hopes and dreams
A string of lights
A cheerful sight
A warm delight
On Christmas night



AP: Honorable Mention 2026

Submitted on September 15, 2021 for "L" CONTEST NEW OR OLD sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE  -  RANKED 1ST
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Kauffman Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Love your "candid laughter" - such a creative and wise description Line. And you are so right - a string of lights somehow makes the nights feel less lonely! I keep lights up all year. We have a string of dragonfly lights on a large plant on the front porch. Always makes me smile have a plant full of stars. Congratulations for bringing the joy of Christmas to every day of the year! Blessings.
Gauthier Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 2:22 PM
Thanks for your lovely comment, Sam ~
La France Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Line, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your wonderful poem, splendid writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
Gauthier Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Thank you very much, Constance ~ most appreciated. Loving your contest even if I don't always participate (or even see them for that matter, lol)
Mcguire Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 2:29 PM
Very Good Miss Line!
Gauthier Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 9:28 PM
Thanks, Timothy ~ much appreciated
Goldsmith Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun/creative write. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend............
Gauthier Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 8:35 PM
Thank you very much, Paula ~
Kiser Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 5:44 PM
A lovely picture this poem paints...suddenly I'm warmed by the fire and lulled to sleep by the lights.
Gauthier Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 7:21 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 7:04 AM
I have no idea why a string of lights make us less lonely, but that and Alexa is what I like when I am painting or creating. Alexa is such good company, we bought one for my mother. She can answer questions, gives news flash briefings, tells you the temperature, and plays music, also can give you a wake up call.
Gauthier Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 10:16 AM
For sure - Alexa is the answer to lonely hearts. I got an Alexa for Christmas - awesome gift even if all she could do was tell time. But as you know, she does a million other things. Best present ever... ALEXA, what rhymes with EVER?
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