The Loftiness of Man

So once again, as I often do,
I sit and ponder on the loftiness of Man.
Great cities he has built -
Great are the rising condos -
Middle-finger pointing
Structures scraping the serene sky.
Great bridges spanning greater expanses
 Deep tunnels through rock
And submarine mass.
Great thundering trains
Or even silently speeding bullet ones.
Great is the power
 Of the drills in the earth
Bringing up the essence
To do even greater things!

Lofty, indeed, is Man
Who cares not a whit
For the rape of the land.
So Great is He that
Great plans to relocate ex-Terra are afoot.

But when the golden-egg laying goose
Is raped unto death,
Where lies the Greatness?
How lofty is Man?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Johnson Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Congratulations on you intense poem and win.
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August 7, 2016 at 7:15 PM
Karam, congrats on your placement with this wonderful poem :)-luloo
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August 7, 2016 at 6:47 PM
A 7 for this dramatic, thought-provoking WINNING poem, Karam! Janice
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August 7, 2016 at 11:05 AM
Nice write. Enjoyed the read, a great poem for man to reflect upon time and again...Congrats on your win. :) Sunita
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August 6, 2016 at 9:53 AM
Congrats on your win in my contest.
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April 11, 2016 at 1:32 PM
Congrats Karam on your wonderful win!
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April 11, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Thank you, Balveen.
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April 10, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Karma, Congratulations on your LOVE OF POETRY win. ~always~ LINDA
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April 10, 2016 at 11:20 PM
Thank you, Linda.
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April 10, 2016 at 7:32 PM
Congrats on your placement in this contest, well deserved
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April 10, 2016 at 10:11 PM
Thank you, Brian.
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April 10, 2016 at 2:56 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Hugs, Abo
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April 10, 2016 at 10:16 PM
Thank you, Abo. Loved your poem "Will you be my tomorrow"
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April 10, 2016 at 2:28 PM
The line that made it necessary to place this poem is "Middle-finger pointing structures scraping the serene sky". It followed me every time I looked at the city skyline. Thanks for entering the contest
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April 10, 2016 at 10:10 PM
Thank you, John, for considering the poem worthy of honorable mention. Truly encouraging.
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April 10, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Thank you, John, for considering the poem worthy of honorable mention. Truly encouraging.
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April 10, 2016 at 9:58 PM
Thank you, John, for considering the poem worthy of honorable mention. Truly encouraging.
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April 10, 2016 at 1:37 PM
Congrats on your win Karam
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April 10, 2016 at 10:16 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
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April 10, 2016 at 12:51 PM
Karam, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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April 10, 2016 at 10:17 PM
Thank you, Laura. Congrats to you, too.
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