The Living Oak

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In the garden, an oak tree stands tall above all creation. 
This oak tree has broad shoulders and a firm foundation.

There are powerful branches reaching up to the sky,
giving many birds a place to nest or rest as they fly.

Watching carefully there is more than you first see.
This oak tree is structured much like a community. 

Like families, each bud springs out so fresh and new.
When they mature some of these sport a different hue. 

When the wind blows you can hear all the chatters. 
Each leaf feels important and what they say matters.

In the autumn of life, a community grows a bit older.
There is less light and their colors become bolder. 

These leaves eventually fade and fall from the tree,
becoming a memory as each leaf becomes a retiree.

After their passing, all will understand there is a reason.
A new generation will be here and it will be their season.

Edward J Ebbs - August 22, 2015

Written for a Contest, Trees Personified

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/21/2015 10:39:00 AM
Trees are one of my loves and the first thing I seek in my time joining with Nature.This is a very good, well crafted poem with a very fine message! A7
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 11/28/2015 9:08:00 AM
Thank You Robert :)
Date: 9/3/2015 3:41:00 PM
Ed, oh this poem is truly beautiful and the pic is amazing also, so wonderfully penned, fantastic writing and thanks for visiting my poem, dream . . .
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 9/5/2015 9:49:00 PM
The picture of the Oak Tree is amazing...a little boy or girl's dream :)
Date: 8/27/2015 6:10:00 PM
stunning Edward love oak trees so majestic hugs 7
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 8/29/2015 6:52:00 PM
The picture is particularly stunning...it reminds me in an abstract way of the tree in the movie Avatar :)
Date: 8/26/2015 9:35:00 PM
oh gosh, I need to go find a picture for MINE!! you really came up with an awesome picture there to go with your cool poem on the oak tree. That is cool that we both chose that magnificent tree to write about!
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Date: 8/29/2015 6:51:00 PM
I see you found a tree...the only thing missing from the trees are a swing.
Date: 8/26/2015 2:26:00 PM
Wonderful write, Ed, good luck in the contest a 7. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/29/2015 6:50:00 PM
Thanks Eve...
Date: 8/23/2015 1:15:00 PM
A very nice write on the oak tree, Ed. I really enjoyed the beautiful imagery in these lines. Great couplet rhyming, as well... Good luck in the contest!
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 8/23/2015 2:41:00 PM
Thank you Kelly, that means a lot to me :)
Date: 8/22/2015 5:46:00 PM
Such lovely personification Ed good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 8/23/2015 5:00:00 AM
Thanks Jan, you are always so nice :)
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