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The Living Dead

Take away the safety net What remains only the weak kill and call themselves men A coward hides in the mountain of who they are behind their own curse justifying wrongs Tears falling each and every single day suffering innocence weep Self inflicted forged inside darkness Mortal sin The day will arrive when you have to come out of your shell facing reality Evil deeds done dirt cheap begging soul forgiveness Blinding pure is the eyes of our Saviour Salvation enslaved by guilt poor is the heart where poison seeps Rich forgiving pride the Lords prayer I say Please God open their eyes to your peaceful presence Make them aware of your goodness morally within Open their souls to the truth such deeds hold an ugly sin Mercy on your damned soul Such actions destiny crumbles inside their castle walls bleed burning with fire Angry all their lives at everyone but themselves Articles of faith strips them bare I tip my eyes to the Lord Blessing myself in the name of our Father the Holy trinity Begging their forgiveness One third of Man blind faceless spill blood cursing peace and His Holiness in the end days

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/31/2015 3:46:00 PM
Now THESE are the true Living Dead... not that stupid TV show that bears the same name. People without a soul or direction towards good in their lives are the true damned. Well done Liam! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/29/2015 6:08:00 AM
wonderfully penned.. :) keep hope. all shall forgiven if perceived for... :)) take care.. a 7
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/29/2015 7:29:00 AM
i know in my heart when it is born again bless you deeply
Date: 11/12/2015 2:54:00 PM
- A dark poem, dear Liam - Insecure feelings, deep ..... no hope for "eternity" (?) - It gives me a picture of people who go blind without thoughts in their head - No opinion, no soul and heart - A talented poem - Best wishes for a peaceful and happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/11/2015 9:49:00 PM
Hi Liam! Wow!A most powerful,outstanding poem,you've written here my dearest friend,Liam.Very sad but very beautifully penned with a lot of deep caring,understanding n' compassion for all humanity.Yes,it's very sad and terrible whats taking place all over the world these days.So many sad horrible situations, injustices against mankind, just very tragic n' really saddens my heart n' soul very much too.I know that you have a very beautiful heart n soul Liam, a heart of pure gold and that you deeply care.So very sweet of you!God bless you more for it.Thank you so much for caring, writing n' sharing this very beautiful great piece, Liam.Another beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden pen!Superb!Excellent poem!Just awesome!I love it.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers!Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^"
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