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The Lives We Choose

I am poet I have lived many lives I have walked down ancient corridors Climbed insurmountable obstacles Held universes within my hands Gravity does not hold me I breathe among the stars I dream the dreams of kings While kissing the lips of angels I have spoken with the prophets of old For me time is of no consequence I am somewhere and everywhere I live a hundred years in but a few moments Fly along my verse Be transported to the impossible Shed your limitations Know the freedom of the mind Taste and touch the incredible For you too are poet Dream beyond the obvious Create all your happy endings If you cry Let it be a magnificent sadness Write beyond your tortured walls You choose You be The one Who lives many Extrordinary Wonderful Unbelievable Lives Inspired by Eileen Ghali's poem "Another Somewhere"

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Date: 3/2/2014 6:43:00 AM
Oh what a pleasure it is to be invited to wander along the poetic labyrinth of your mind.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2014 9:09:00 AM
You makeme smile!
Date: 3/1/2014 10:12:00 PM
Oh Richard..if you cry let it be a magnificent sadness..write beyond your tortured walls...wow..this spoke to me..as I write many times on a bad day....it feels good to find peace in friendly words...this is a good poem...levels to dicect and enjoy....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2014 9:12:00 AM
Wow, thanks Donna, you hafe lifted me with this generous comment. Hugs Rick.
Date: 2/28/2014 7:59:00 AM
Richard, I love the whole poem, but the lines that really struck me were "Gravity does not hold me, I breathe among the stars." That is quite the imagery, and it is a very powerful statement. Thank you for sharing.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2014 9:13:00 AM
My pleasure Tim, Thankyou for your kind comment.
Date: 2/28/2014 12:49:00 AM
And this....this is how it's done. Eileen is a gracious inspiration to us all. True story.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/28/2014 7:57:00 AM
Hi Drake, I must agree, her spirit and energy are most appreciated. How have you been my friend?
Date: 2/27/2014 8:13:00 PM
Spoilt for choice where to go next Rick, think I'll just ride your verse for a while and enjoy our unbelievable lives. Great inspirational poem. Take care, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/28/2014 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Rich, I'm pleased you enjoyed. You take care as well.
Date: 2/27/2014 4:47:00 AM
this is superb Rick great inspiration handled beautifully hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2014 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Shadow, hugs back to you.
Date: 2/26/2014 8:28:00 PM
wow, WHAT an inspiration she was for this one. One heck of a poet's poem, my friend!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2014 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.;0).
Date: 2/26/2014 7:05:00 PM
Extraordinary write dear poet ! Have a blessed week Richard. I look forward to reading more of your writes ! James
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2014 7:07:00 PM
Thanks, it has been blessed so far, thanks for the thoughtful comment.
Date: 2/26/2014 10:06:00 AM
Thank you for adding that at the bottom of your poem.....I'm beaming....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2014 10:28:00 AM
My pleasure, I had meant to do it right away but I had to get my day started. I was leading a discussion formy men's group.
Date: 2/25/2014 11:05:00 PM
I relate to this fantastic and wise poem very much! amazing job with the words and message you sent across to us all. It spoke to me! Great write Richard! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2014 8:31:00 AM
Thanks so much Chris.
Date: 2/25/2014 7:28:00 PM
this is amazing, richard! absolutely wonderful - i love it!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2014 9:02:00 PM
Thanks Ilene.
Date: 2/25/2014 5:24:00 PM
This is grand Richard .... Tim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2014 6:46:00 PM
Thanks Tim.
Date: 2/25/2014 2:18:00 PM
I simply adore this piece....It is beyond magnificent. Richard, Yes.....Yes to it all. 7 is not enough....Perhaps a 100 and an A+ from me....Stupendous...Poetry is my passion....It lets me live those many lives.....Wonderful! Thanks for sharing
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2014 6:48:00 PM
I feel lost when the internet is down. Thanks for this amazing comment I am grinning ear to ear. Hugs Rick
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/25/2014 2:22:00 PM
Was out of internet today.... :( It's late now...I was preparing for my classes....I tried to find someone to go with me today...No luck. Hope I can make it tomorrow...I'm assured packages are kept for a month. I'm not worried. I hope tomorrow will be the day! :) I faved this....It gives us poets superhuman status...I LOVE IT...
Date: 2/25/2014 1:02:00 PM
This is a great poem Richard. One that gives us hope for better things and something to look foreward tol. thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 2/25/2014 12:46:00 PM
I accept your most wonderful and frightening invitation. To be the poet. To paraphrase the tennis axiom "just consider the poem an extension of your life". I quite like the line "If you cry be a magnificent sadness"
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Date: 2/25/2014 10:31:00 AM
Such a hopeful and beautiful poem for everyome to dream and create..believe in happy endings.Life is indeed what We make it.Tnks for sharing this beauty : )
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Date: 2/25/2014 8:59:00 AM
One of your best. You just keep getting better and better. You make me very proud. Love you Mamabear I had thought I would have the first comment but logged in too slow
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2014 9:27:00 AM
Ha ha, your still number one to me mom.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2014 9:27:00 AM
I meant you're.
Date: 2/25/2014 8:56:00 AM
I have many lives within me, all those worth living and understanding! I really enjoyed reading this awesome write here this morning! What a brilliant poem my friend, such a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2014 8:59:00 AM
Hi Russell, so nice to have you be the first to comment on my poem. I hope you are living a wonderful life today.

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