The Littlest Pumpkin

Week after week I can hear the laughter echoing throughout the old tilled field I can feel the patter of feet along with the dust rubbing upon my toughened orange skin The rains have come and my bed has become muddy the laughs are getting softer as each day passes I can see others carried away but why not me I may not be as big as my brothers or sisters but I am perfect not a blemish upon me but here I sit almost all alone left to rot. Off in the distance I hear a little voice "Mommy all these pumpkins are too heavy " "No mommy that one is ugly" I hear her getting closer pick me. please please pick me Then I see her....the most beautiful sight I have ever seen Her big caramel eyes, staring right at me. She swoops down and cradles me in her arms. "Look mommy I found one" "no it's not too small" " It is just right" My heart smiles as I sit overlooking her. Here on this fairy princess night stand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 11/6/2015 12:42:00 PM
That very nice and sweet
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Date: 11/5/2015 12:21:00 PM
" That barbed wire on your path is the mind. Cut the wire and your path clearly find". Smile, your fairy princess will find you. I liked your poem, Congratulation.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/5/2015 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Pashang
Date: 11/3/2015 12:55:00 PM
Wonderful poem Congratulation Anisha Dutta
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2015 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Anisha
Date: 11/2/2015 5:53:00 PM
A great story of forgotten and found made me smile. Congratulations on poem of the week!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2015 1:40:00 PM
Thanks Eve
Date: 11/2/2015 3:42:00 PM
Hey Tim, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem being chosen for POTW!! Absolutely beautiful piece helping us to see from the little pumpkins' point of view. Excellent writing, expression and form. Be Blessed, Neva
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/2/2015 3:44:00 PM
Thank You Neva...Be blessed
Date: 11/2/2015 6:01:00 AM
A perfect match; a beautiful little girl and an adorable little pumpkin. Congratulations, Tim!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/2/2015 3:45:00 PM
Thank you Lin
Date: 11/2/2015 3:12:00 AM
Very nice Tim. Congratulations on POTW. Verlena
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Date: 11/2/2015 3:12:00 AM
Very nice Tim. Congratulations on POTW. Verlena
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/2/2015 3:44:00 PM
Thanks Verlena
Date: 11/1/2015 10:56:00 PM
Sweet personified & pumpkin pie'd! :) 7+++ Congrats on potw too Tim!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2015 10:57:00 PM
Thanks Red
Date: 11/1/2015 10:54:00 AM
lovely write Tim :) love and peace :)~7~
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2015 1:12:00 PM
Thanks Remnants
Date: 11/1/2015 10:14:00 AM
Sweet write! You do them well, Tim. I can just imagine the scene. congrats on your POTW!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2015 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 11/1/2015 9:59:00 AM
Hello Tim!! A perfect poem and a perfect selection indeed for POTW!! Outstanding and very artfully done. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2015 1:10:00 PM
Thank you very much Gary. I need to stop by your page.
Date: 11/1/2015 9:57:00 AM
Hi Tom: Wow! A tribute to a small pumpkin. How unique! Great write.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2015 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Ralph
Date: 11/1/2015 9:31:00 AM
Way to go Tim! Congratulations on POTW
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2015 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Richard
Date: 10/29/2015 9:29:00 AM
That little fairy princess was not looking for material gains; she bestowed her innocent love without reservations. Very touching and beautiful poem, Tim. #7 // paul
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Date: 11/1/2015 7:09:00 AM
Thanks Paul
Date: 10/27/2015 3:33:00 PM
this is so sweet putting yourself through the eyes of a little girl. On the fairy princess night stand no less. Precious!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2015 7:08:00 AM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 10/27/2015 4:53:00 AM
Im going to do some pumpkin soup on Friday... Beware littlest pumpkin..Such a sweet story.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2015 7:08:00 AM
Thanks sb...hope he survived : )
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/27/2015 7:00:00 AM
: )
Date: 10/27/2015 3:53:00 AM
- So sweet one, Tim - " It is just right" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2015 7:07:00 AM
Thanks A-L
Date: 10/26/2015 12:55:00 PM
aww lovely write.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2015 7:07:00 AM
Thanks Diane
Date: 10/26/2015 9:32:00 AM
A river flow of beautiful narration Tim... You must love caramels.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2015 7:05:00 AM
Haha...that I do ...thanks Olive
Date: 10/26/2015 7:50:00 AM
Precious poetic treat!
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Date: 11/1/2015 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Anna
Date: 10/26/2015 6:37:00 AM
Beautifully tender and didactic, my friend, Tim! I loved it! A seven!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2015 7:03:00 AM
Thank you my good friend
Date: 10/26/2015 2:21:00 AM
This sounds like you have some very special children in your heart to be writing something as beautiful as this. I had to read it twice over. As Linda has said this is so perfect.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2015 7:02:00 AM
Thanks Yvonne
Date: 10/25/2015 10:25:00 PM
Tim, this is sweet, "Just perfect. I like the cute title as well... Love LINDA
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2015 7:02:00 AM
Thanks Linda
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