The Littlest Elf

Time was running out, Christmas Eve was drawing nigh!
The elves had worked day and night since early in July!
To meet Santa's toy-making schedule, there must be no slack,
To ensure there were plenty of goodies for Santa's toy sack!

Elfie was a mischievous but a hard-working little sprite.
He was the littlest elf of all, alas, this added to his plight!
It seemed that the harder he worked and try as he might,
The hapless little fellow just couldn't do anything right!

For instance, he put Jills in boxes meant for Jacks-In-The-Box,
And placed chirping chickadees in all the fancy cuckoo clocks!
As he daydreamed he painted the fire trucks aquamarine,
And put wheels and wings on every toy submarine!

Talking dollies counted cadence, "Hup, two, three, four!"
Toy soldiers cried, "I want my mama!" as they marched to war!
He placed Lincoln Logs in boxes labled Tinker Toys.
Oh!  What a Christmas 'twould be for little girls and boys!

Santa mused, "It seems that every job I put him on he mars,
So I'll put him to work pulling levers making Christmas Stars!"
He did so well that Santa asked, "Won't you come along with me,
And place a brilliant Star atop every child's Christmas Tree?"

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Kayode Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 10:47 PM
What always thrills me in your Poems is the rhyme, you have so perfected it that there is nothing you can not do with it , a good story here with jewel of rhyme on it; congrats Robert and have a wonderful Weekend...huggs
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 9:12 PM
Wonderful story Robert. I love it. Congratulations on your first place win.
Yvonne Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 4:43 PM
I love this beautiful little story told through poetry. A Fav for me. Congratulations on your first place win.
Jerden Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 2:16 PM
Looks like he found his calling! Well done! Congratulations!
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 8:23 AM
Enjoyed a great tale from the master, congrats on the win
Lamoureux Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 8:04 AM
Wow, I just love it Robert. Truly one of the very best tales! Congratulations!
Guzzi Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 9:19 PM
Go Bob! How cute, sweet, original & funny! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 6:03 PM
He just needed to find his place. A great story and win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 4:56 PM
congratulations on your fine #1 win
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 3:38 PM
This would make a lovely story book - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx
Duncan Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 11:32 PM
Oh I love this Robert since I am scotch/Irish & Norwegian ;} it's going in my favorites ;},,, have a blessed day Bob;}
Rutherford Avatar
December 17, 2012 at 4:21 PM
Robert what a great imagination you have ,creative and funny too. The line , 'Toy soldiers cried 'I want my mama'. Made me smile . Your Blackberry poem had me looking for the one I wrote about my Grandma. It's called A Great Lady. Merry Christmas to you and yours. hugs Anne
Eastman Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:43 AM
YAAAHHH! Way to go Santa... Very enjoyable read... And perfect for the season!
Horne Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 8:09 AM
love this, Bob. Hope you're both well and having a great weekend : )
Babcock Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 7:42 PM
This is a cute story and hope you have grand kids to read it too. love phyl
Harrell Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 7:43 AM
So sweet. So littlest Elf has a new job. Yeyy. Enjoyed, Bob. Love ya. Have a fun weekend :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 11:06 PM
this is very cute. Could be a children's story book! You like questionku? you should do a bunch of them, Robert.
West Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 10:53 PM
Hi Bob, This is such a great poem, love the little elves. Thank you also for reading my writes, appreciate that. I was in USAF from '65 to '69, Andrews and Hickam, made it to Ssgt. Like you, would do it again if I could. Rollo
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December 7, 2012 at 9:26 PM
Hello Bob H... love the x-mass poem... and the working elves ... good ol' x-mass tree topper... nice images...pd...
Sivey Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 8:47 PM
This is a wonderful and stupendous write my friend! You have delighted me to no end with this perfect Christmas story here Bob! I really enjoyed reading this pleasant and intriguing poem this evening! You have painted a beautiful picture with this fascinating write of yours! What a powerful tale of an hapless little elf...and finally finding his true calling! Great Work!!
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