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The Little Red Ant Who Came To Visit

A little red ant scampered
                                                  over my blanket and climbed
                                                     just to bite me and visit
                                                           as I fell asleep.
                                                                   ~~~

                                                 With my eyes closed I felt him 
                                                    crawl by the picnic basket
                                                   to my guest who just arrived,
                                                          eyes now on Tracie.

                                                                    ~~~


written by Michael J Falotico
for "Bite Me" contest sponsored
by Linda (Jersey Girl) Sweet Heart

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2012

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 4/16/2012 8:13:00 PM Congrats on your win, Michael! I love the picnic scene. So cute!! Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/16/2012 11:53:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Michael. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 4/15/2012 4:11:00 AM Congrats Michael on an awesome win,, like it!! Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 4/15/2012 1:56:00 AM Congratulations on your super win Michael xx Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 4/14/2012 9:18:00 PM Ants can ruin just about anyone's picnic! Great job with this winner, Michael. Title is inviting too. :) Gwendolen Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/14/2012 8:51:00 PM Congratulations, Michael. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/14/2012 8:11:00 PM Big congrats, Michael. and thanks for my win in your note contest, such a cute idea! Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 4/14/2012 8:08:00 PM lol...Congratulations on your win Michael...well done...big hugs,love deb Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/14/2012 7:29:00 PM congrats Michael luv on a super duper win for this sensational entry luv.. JG in "bite me" mode.. xo.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/7/2012 8:59:00 AM thankxx for this cool entry for my crazy contest Michael luv.. good luck ..hope u had fun composing .. thankxx for Easter wishes ... u are welcome for birthday wishes... what day is it exactly..?? 19th seems to be sticking in my head luv.. JG in party mode .. xoxo.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/6/2012 9:40:00 PM thankxx for supporting my fun contest Michael luv.. since I am sponsoring .. could not receive your "bite" so glad u chose Tracie .. good luck luv.. JG in happy mode ..now that u are here again luv.. xoxo.. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 4/6/2012 8:59:00 PM This is an awesome write my friend! I rather have feelings of angst for ants! They have crawled all over me before and it seems that they all nit me all at once. Oh the pain that I felt then! How many bit you in this write? It seems to me just one, imagine all of them biting you! That's pain right there! You've written a fantastic write here Michael! I love your poem immensely!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/6/2012 8:01:00 PM This is so sweet for Tracie, she gets to be a guest at a lovely picnic, but oh no, she is going to be BITTEN. Good one,Michael. Login to Reply