Michael J. Falotico Poet Dodoitsu

The Little Red Ant Who Came To Visit

A little red ant scampered
                                                  over my blanket and climbed
                                                     just to bite me and visit
                                                           as I fell asleep.
                                                                   ~~~

                                                 With my eyes closed I felt him 
                                                    crawl by the picnic basket
                                                   to my guest who just arrived,
                                                          eyes now on Tracie.

                                                                    ~~~


written by Michael J Falotico
for "Bite Me" contest sponsored
by Linda (Jersey Girl) Sweet Heart

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 16, 2012 at 8:13 PM Congrats on your win, Michael! I love the picnic scene. So cute!! Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown April 16, 2012 at 11:53 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Gautami Phookan April 15, 2012 at 4:11 AM Congrats Michael on an awesome win,, like it!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl April 15, 2012 at 1:56 AM Congratulations on your super win Michael xx

Gwendolen Song April 14, 2012 at 9:18 PM Ants can ruin just about anyone's picnic! Great job with this winner, Michael. Title is inviting too. :) Gwendolen

Joyce Johnson April 14, 2012 at 8:51 PM Congratulations, Michael. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich April 14, 2012 at 8:11 PM Big congrats, Michael. and thanks for my win in your note contest, such a cute idea!

Deborah Burch April 14, 2012 at 8:08 PM lol...Congratulations on your win Michael...well done...big hugs,love deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 14, 2012 at 7:29 PM congrats Michael luv on a super duper win for this sensational entry luv.. JG in "bite me" mode.. xo..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 7, 2012 at 8:59 AM thankxx for this cool entry for my crazy contest Michael luv.. good luck ..hope u had fun composing .. thankxx for Easter wishes ... u are welcome for birthday wishes... what day is it exactly..?? 19th seems to be sticking in my head luv.. JG in party mode .. xoxo..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 6, 2012 at 9:40 PM thankxx for supporting my fun contest Michael luv.. since I am sponsoring .. could not receive your "bite" so glad u chose Tracie .. good luck luv.. JG in happy mode ..now that u are here again luv.. xoxo..

Russell Sivey April 6, 2012 at 8:59 PM This is an awesome write my friend! I rather have feelings of angst for ants! They have crawled all over me before and it seems that they all nit me all at once. Oh the pain that I felt then! How many bit you in this write? It seems to me just one, imagine all of them biting you! That's pain right there! You've written a fantastic write here Michael! I love your poem immensely!!

Andrea Dietrich April 6, 2012 at 8:01 PM This is so sweet for Tracie, she gets to be a guest at a lovely picnic, but oh no, she is going to be BITTEN. Good one,Michael.