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Not sure if this is a form already or not but there are 12 lines,3 stanzas of 4 lines, and the rhyme scheme is... 1. Aa 2.b 3.Aa 4.b.....5.Cc 6.d 7.Cc 8.d.....9.Ee 10.f 11.Ee 12.f

The Little Death



Each leaf that falls is mourned by all As trees prepare for the little death The glory of their life in warm sunshine bright Becomes a dream when it's time for rest As a lover, the wind, strips them to bare skin And they shiver as the air grows cold Lean branches bend when snows begin Youth blows away…and suddenly we're old Sap inside on hold, as blood when eyes close Then the breath of life, gasping, departs Each tree enfolds a spark of life like gold Till snow melts in Spring’s warm heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Maverick Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 1:03 PM
Boo hoo..Ya got me Crystol.' I think its better Next time if you 'leaf this type out?' Due to me Being 'decidedly deciduosly depressed' I might Even dig a spring outta the mattress.' To focus On until the real one arrives.' To spring me free.' I can see some shaking their heads at my daring To attempt family fun jokes..just whenThey had Me condemned.lol.)))
Woods Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 10:03 AM
Oh Joe... you are a unique soul! Your jokes have me grinning from ear to ear!! Thanks for stopping by to make my day! Xo
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 6:43 PM
Congrats on POTD! You did well!
Woods Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 9:26 AM
Tysm! Xo
Rodgers Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 5:46 AM
Dear Crystol, I am back with a big congratulations on a stellar POTD. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Woods Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 8:51 AM
Tysm Daniel!! Xo
Nicole Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 6:28 PM
' Each leaf that falls is mourned by all. ' A gentle reminder of life, and those around us during our last moments. Your thoughts are beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Crystol, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Woods Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 8:51 AM
Oh thanks Brandy! That's so nice to hear! Xo
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:07 PM
Hello Cystrol, congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy your special day. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 10:14 AM
Hello Cystrol, Thank you for the hugs. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Woods Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 8:51 AM
Hugs rbay! Xo
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 10:46 AM
It's such a shame we cant be rejuvenated like the trees - guess i will just have to grow old disgracefully with my poopy poetry lol:-) many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan x
Woods Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 8:50 AM
Lol... grace is overrated as far as aging goes! Xo
Slaughter Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 10:33 AM
Quite lovely, Crystol, and congrats on POTD.
Woods Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 8:49 AM
Appreciate it Jim! Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 9:42 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful POTD win. What a lovely write. Enjoy your day with your win......................
Woods Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 8:48 AM
Thanks Paula! Xo
May Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 9:14 AM
Wonderful write, Congrats on POTD
Woods Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 8:48 AM
Ty! Xo
Tor Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 7:40 AM
Returning to wish you a big Congratulations for receiving POTD...
Woods Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 8:48 AM
Thanks Michael! Xo
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 6:07 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d. ... autumn is here and frosty winter is just around the corner, Crystol :) - hugs
Woods Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 8:47 AM
My favorite time of year! Tysm! Xo
Callus Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:53 AM
Congratulations on p.o.t.d. Crystol! Like those trees we all face obstacles in life, but if we face them with strength and self belief we can overcome and return as or stronger than before! Regards // paul
Woods Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 6:00 AM
So true thanks! Xo
Trestrail Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 4:15 AM
Congrats on POTD. Now fire up that ukulele, girl, and let’s do this right. I’ll bring the hooch!
Woods Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:57 AM
Lol...IDK bout you Mr. Trestrail! Love your humor and wit... I'm a whiskey on the rocks gal when I do imbibe! Got the Uke all tuned up...;) xo
Rodgers Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 3:58 AM
Dear Crystol, what a great title and so fitting to the season. I love how you show the mysteries of life and death and renewal. A big congratulations on getting POTD. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Woods Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:57 AM
Back at you my friend! Thank you! Xo
Kitchin Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 3:26 AM
Crystol, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD.
Woods Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:52 AM
Oh thx! Great to hear from you! Xo
Seeker Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 2:30 AM
Apt analogy, enjoyed this poem, ringing with truth, warmest congratulations on POTD, Crystal
Woods Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:51 AM
Thanks US! Honored you enjoyed my poem! Xo
Lane Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 2:22 AM
We die little deaths each time our lives are in turmoil. Each time puts another scar on our hearts, but we survive to have a new season of budding. Well written, Crystol.
Woods Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:50 AM
Yess just so Lin, ty for your attention and words of wisdom! Xo
Williams Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 1:33 AM
Back again to congratulate on your POTD - well earned. Crystol
Woods Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:49 AM
Tysm! Xo
Meadows Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 12:59 AM
A beautiful poem. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Woods Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:48 AM
Ty Daisy for taking time to encourage! Xo
Cunningham Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 12:36 AM
We mourn the little death but we look forward to the rebirth. Congratulations to you Crystol on todays POTD honour. Tom
Woods Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:48 AM
Tysm Tom! I'm honored! Xo
Richards Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 5:20 AM
Lovely smooth transition from dying back to new life emerging. Nice use of analogy, Crystol :)
Woods Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 7:02 AM
Oh tysm Suzette! That means a lot from you who is so talented! Xo
Williams Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 1:53 AM
Such an evocative and lyrical comparisons to nature Crystol. Your ending where you refer to a new life is so smoothly done. Maria
Parker Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 1:00 AM
Of course, POTD. Congratz on your capturing the Gods' Eyes. :o))
Woods Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 7:01 AM
Appreciate that Maria! Thanks for dropping in! Xo
Parker Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 12:27 AM
Metaphor on woody display. Lovely. Luckily, life is a 12 season year. Un peu de mort...:o))
Parker Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 9:57 AM
@Sz: Oui!!
Woods Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 7:00 AM
Thanks for your input Arlo, always good to hear from you! Xo
Richards Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 5:18 AM
La petite ... The title of this poem threw me at first :)
Tor Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 9:04 AM
The analogy's you set forth in your writings are wonderful to read. Examples of life transitioning into death through examples of leaves, and the cycles starts again. The mourning of leafs is a great metaphor to what us humans feel when one of our Dear love one passes. The process of life's cycle is deeply rooted in your words Crystol. A marvelous write. Thanks for sharing...
Woods Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 6:49 AM
Thank you Michael, I appreciate your thoughtful comments! Xo
Sharma  Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 7:30 AM
Gosh, what a heart-touching and soulful poem this is, dear Crystal! I am absolutely in awe of your writing style and how you convey depth of emotions with such ease, along with gorgeous wordsmithery. How profoundly you've described the shift from autumn to finally when life blooms in spring.. a moment which flows from death to rebirth! "Each leaf that falls is mourned by all" So tender! "Youth blows away…and suddenly we're old" That comparison to human life... says it all.. "Each tree enfolds a spark of life like gold" Loved reading this.. A FAVE for me, keep shining and writing always!
Woods Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 7:36 AM
Wow what a review! Thank you so so much! You don't know how encouraging it is, or maybe you do as a poet writer yourself! :) You've made my day! I'll come by your page for a visit soon! Xoxo
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