The Little Boy In the Velvet Red Vest

When my heels tromped down the dark narrow path
Where the buck- even – trod
It was early fall, and the trees were half trimmed.
The sun flickered through the barren tops,
    and the greenish- brown canopy hung low and half dressed

However, it was not ashamed

The leaves crinkled and they crunched
    where my feet and I traveled
And not too far, as I lagged along
     I came upon an empty nest

It lay in decay
 from the wind and the rain
For how long,
only as long as the eggs were gone

And while I stood there with my head half cocked
I looked close at the old dilapidated twigs that rot
I remembered the boy in the velvet red vest
O’ how nicely it was weaved
it fit snug around his delegate chest

I see him every spring
And no matter how old I get
He still wears the same velvet red vest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foulk Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 9:41 PM
what a most beautiful and refreshing piece of poetry.
Smith Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 6:47 PM
Thank you for the nice comments...
Mehta Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 6:20 PM
I enjoyed this write with nice expressions depicting a scene, nancy
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April 9, 2011 at 5:54 PM
Very nice scene you set and a very warm inviting tone! I enjoyed!
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