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The Little Blue Pill and Its Effects For Contest

Vasodilative disproportionality: Somnambulation.

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Date: 8/14/2015 9:32:00 AM
G'day Bill, you entered this most intriguing poem into my Haibun competition. I'm afraid to say it isn't a Haibun. Prior to the haiku in a haibun there is meant to be a piece of prose. I'm sorry mate but you won't be making it past the 2nd round.
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Bill Lindsay
Date: 8/14/2015 9:47:00 AM
As a novice, I can only improve; however, I would appreciate your thoughts as to how it ought to be described.