The Little Blue Pill and Its Effects For Contest

Vasodilative
disproportionality:
Somnambulation.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Thirtyseven Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 9:32 AM
G'day Bill, you entered this most intriguing poem into my Haibun competition. I'm afraid to say it isn't a Haibun. Prior to the haiku in a haibun there is meant to be a piece of prose. I'm sorry mate but you won't be making it past the 2nd round.
Lindsay Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 9:47 AM
As a novice, I can only improve; however, I would appreciate your thoughts as to how it ought to be described.
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