Richard Lamoureux Poet Free verse

The Listener

Start at the start
ask your questions
Although I’m no priest 
I will hear your confession
Divulge your sins
no judgement or correction
Within my skeleton closet
I have my own sin collection

Off the mirror of my silvered mind
 you might witness your reflection
Dive deep into my psyche
I’ll gladly offer protection
Our humanity is sacred 
within it find connection
Choose what power you need
embrace our connection 

Access to my mind 
is translucent screen thin
A bridge across the distance 
you can easily gaze within
I’ll instinctively grasp your hand
I’ve been where you’ve been
So let’s start where we’ve started
before the barrier of sin
Together finding treasures
hidden within

No need to worry
or regret your choice
I wholeheartedly embrace 
the sound of your voice
You offer me mystical music
free from vibrational noise
I hear and listen to you
free willingly by choice
Heart being deeply touched 
Joyful eyes become moist
Together our inner children play
as we both rejoice

Feel your heart beating slower
As your breath becomes shallower 
There is strength in release
it connects you to your power
A life can change in a moment 
or be transformed in an hour
So rise up, climb up
 to the top of the tower
At the edge of the universe
light up the night sky
You are born to be
a transcendent meteor shower.




Response to Elaine Perrin’s “Help Me Please” poem

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

1 2

Eileen Manassian June 1, 2020 at 10:31 AM So uplifting and beautiful. Why aren't there more understanding people like you in the world... hugs Richard Lamoureux June 1, 2020 at 11:14 AM You are kind, hugs back Eileen.

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 19, 2019 at 10:36 AM Beautiful beryl poetry, R. Reux!! Such divine rumination regarding our common humanity. You expressed this spiritual connection w/dazzling sapphire strokes of prism brilliance. A poetic masterpiece!! Going into the fave file for sure. LAMBLA! Love and more blessed love always!

Caren Krutsinger November 4, 2019 at 7:07 AM What we have to remember is - Let Go, Let God. "There is strength in release it connects you to your power" Nicely penned Richard. Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2019 at 7:51 AM I agree Caren.

Gershon Wolf November 1, 2019 at 11:00 AM I just re-read this out of 'curiosity'/genuine interest, and am deeply impressed with your poetic approach to the subjects you tackle. Can't remember reading a Richard Lamoureux poem that hasn't challenged my thinking in a profound way. Bravo, Poet! Cheers, Gershon

Linda Milgate October 25, 2019 at 12:15 PM As always a well written deeply formed poem, I have always enjoyed your poems that give a silver sliver of spiritual connection for anyone that is aware of something Divine that flows in the Universe. Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2019 at 8:07 AM Thanks Linda.

Kurt Ravidas October 19, 2019 at 6:08 PM When Buddha was asked kinda metaphysical questions about the meaning of life, death, etc., he kept silence. Once his disciples asked him why he never answers. "If an arrow hits a man, - Buddha said, - he does not ask who made the arrow, who loosed it and why it hit him. First he takes out the arrow and heals the wound." Buddha was a listener) Linda Milgate October 25, 2019 at 12:07 PM a great reminder! Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2019 at 6:11 PM I like it.

Constance La France October 18, 2019 at 11:31 AM Richard amazing write (as usual) very uplifting and inspiring! Richard Lamoureux October 18, 2019 at 11:54 AM Thanks so much Constance.

Vladislav Raven October 18, 2019 at 4:33 AM Hi Richard, this is most definitely you. I love the content of this excellent write. A life can change in a moment, these words are so true Richard. I am so glad I dropped by and read this most wonderful poetic piece. You use the full scope of the free verse form mu friend. A Fav. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike. Richard Lamoureux October 18, 2019 at 8:28 AM Thanks buddy.

Arturo Michael October 17, 2019 at 4:58 AM Love the write Richard...Well done Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2019 at 8:32 AM Thanks Arturo. ;0)

Gershon Wolf October 16, 2019 at 7:22 PM Perhaps you've missed your calling: Life Coach / Confidante!! Excellent write! Warm wishes, gw Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2019 at 8:33 AM Thanks Gershon.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2019 at 1:37 PM - A wonderful poem, Richard :) - Words of truth and reality, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2019 at 8:39 AM Thanks Anne Lise, hugs Rick.

Vijay Pandit October 16, 2019 at 11:57 AM Certainly a brilliant response, Richard..I felt the depth of your write: A life can change in a moment or be transformed in an hour So rise up, climb up to the top of the tower..words from an enlightened pen. Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2019 at 8:36 AM Thanks Vijay. ;0)

Sandra Adams October 16, 2019 at 11:03 AM wow i read and loved her poem, great inspiration for this gem you penned... this is an excellent write Rick, shows your compassion shining through :) hugs Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2019 at 8:37 AM You are sweet, thanks Sandra. Hugs Rick.

Alexis Y. October 16, 2019 at 8:28 AM WoW! Richard, What a deep and compassionate response. I must read the poem that inspired a write such as this. Have a fantastic day:-) Alexis Richard Lamoureux October 16, 2019 at 8:31 AM Thanks Alexis. ;0)

Hello There October 16, 2019 at 1:51 AM A compassionate and empathetic piece ~ very nice qualities to share with someone who might be in need. I really enjoyed this piece, Richard. Richard Lamoureux October 16, 2019 at 7:51 AM Thanks HT, I’m pleased you enjoyed it.

Nette Onclaud October 15, 2019 at 3:16 PM despite your generous intent, this poem has a 'thriller' element to it, rich... superb!...huggs Richard Lamoureux October 16, 2019 at 7:52 AM Thanks dear Nette, hugs Rick.

Andrea Dietrich October 14, 2019 at 11:44 AM Oh goodness, it was her funny poem on what chocolate to pick!! Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2019 at 12:10 PM I was inspired by the first two thirds before I knew it was chocolate. ;0)

Andrea Dietrich October 14, 2019 at 11:41 AM I think to fully understand this one, I'll need to see Elaine's. This seems like a priest at first. Then just simply a very good listening friend but then at the end i was getting the idea of the grim reaper!! Telling the person to let go and transcend the universe! (probably got the last part wrong) Anyway, it's a thought provoking poem, Richard. Now I go to see Elaine's! Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2019 at 12:07 PM Nope not a grim reaper. Just her embracing her essence at the end of the poem which is more of a beginning for her.

Tania Kitchin October 14, 2019 at 4:57 AM Rick, love this poem, so true to life, we do all have skeleton's in our closet and need someone to lean on at times, a nice supportive and inviting poem! Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2019 at 8:33 AM Thanks Tania. ;0)

Panagiota Romios October 13, 2019 at 11:28 PM Warm and welcoming... pR Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2019 at 8:34 AM Thanks Panagiota. Hugs Rick.

Juliet Ligon October 13, 2019 at 4:46 PM Great poem. So inviting. Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2019 at 8:34 AM Thanks Juliet, blessings Rick.

Jennifer Proxenos October 13, 2019 at 11:29 AM Hi Rick - I don't know why but people always tell me their deep dark secrets. You are an awesome talented poet, I know I have said this before, but with this poem, I reiterate my previous comments, an excellent write and worthy of a 1st placing. Hugs, Jennifer. Richard Lamoureux October 13, 2019 at 11:35 AM Hi Jennifer, you are kind. It’s not for a contest so I will take your first place comment as lovely gift. Hugs Rick.

Elaine Perrin October 12, 2019 at 10:03 AM Wow! I’m so happy my poem inspired you to write this beautiful response. I absolutely love it and it’s going into my favourites :-) x Richard Lamoureux October 12, 2019 at 10:56 AM Hi Elaine, I’m pleased you enjoyed it. You bring a smile to my morning.

Janice Canerdy October 12, 2019 at 9:38 AM Richard, this wonderful poem says what we all want to hear when we just need to TALK to someone--just need to share. Janice Richard Lamoureux October 12, 2019 at 10:52 AM Thanks Janice, hugs Rick.

Brenda Chiri October 11, 2019 at 2:01 PM Rick I always love stopping by to read you! I simply love your work!;) Richard Lamoureux October 11, 2019 at 4:36 PM Thanks Brenda, you are kind.

1 2