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The lioness hums... The wafting inside my head, Whirling afloat, like a hurricane. I tell myself, The worst she can say, is no Perchance the lioness winks... I will offer my lonely heart to her. My roar will echo through heaven Whispers amongst the fools who doubt me... Daub within the townsmen. A folly frenzy flutters, lip to lip, ear to ear My palms dank, I starred at her across the room. She smiled and winked... Me, I was in awe, I was in love Towards her I walked, stopping two feet away... I then froze, She froze too... Like a time freeze, we both stood silent Slowly, we inched closer... And closer, and closer, still silent, until... Our lips touched, and we kissed I knew right then and there, This wasn't a case of happenstance. I knew, our love, was my destiny... The lion roars... Eight Word Challenege - Bardenesque Poetry Contest Sponsor John Hamilton 1-31-2019

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Date: 2/23/2019 10:45:00 PM
Ah, happy romance, with such suspense, good work, Charles, enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/22/2019 2:56:00 PM
Thanks Charlie so well done!
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Date: 2/22/2019 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations, this is so romantic and intense!
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Date: 1/31/2019 3:30:00 PM
ohh, love the way this wondrous poem progressed to reach its sweet heights, charles!..huggs
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