The Line Between Life and Death

Days long, nights short I find myself lost in time's arms.
I dream with eyes open, thinking about my previous life.
Let alone the tick-tock fill this open space of depression and disconnection.
Wind's breeze is my only friend;
we dance,
we talk,
and sing away with the day's aftermath.
I look through the window's eyes and further beyond the graveyard,
I see decapitated souls.
Lying on dirt beds, but locked in luxurious torture.
Without limbs and a body to guide direction, 
I'm stuck in one position longing for death's scythe to pass me by.
I tremble when all eyes stare upon my quarter-being figure,
and lost with words i remain silenced, in my solitude.
Still looking upon my previous world, I gaze upon life in the open field 
and dream of heaven's sweet thoughts.
Unfortunately my past life eliminated by pain and depression
had no meaning,
being restricted of God's open freedom.
Now let me frost
for I pay the cost,
of sharing solitary confinement 
in locked doors.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Laan Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your win, great poem:))
Devonshire Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 7:25 AM
Very deep and sad poem, Orlando. You did an excellent job here. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 7:22 AM
Congratulations Orlando on your win in the "Maverick Free Verse" contest sponsored by John Moses Freeman. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 8:39 PM
Congratulations on your imaginative poem and win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 8:31 PM
Congrats Orlando on your super win in the Maverick Free Verse contest luv.. enjoy your top ten victory...
Horsman Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 8:11 PM
love the imagery here, Orlando, congrats for this winner, Harry
Mehta Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 6:15 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of john, Orlando
Freeman Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 6:00 PM
Another beautiful and inspiring piece......Orlando. Bravo! Congratulations on your poem's worthy honor in fifth place. Agape, Moses
Croft Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 4:05 PM
i really like your poem
Brown Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 10:14 AM
I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Orlando. Love, Carol
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