The Line

borders are shaping lives, impersonating color of your body cleanliness of your soul transparency of your mind need to fit the frame borders are ingesting destinies, devouring caught in that osmosis draft they are playing russian roulette with your need for bed and meal in which only prize for you is dream of home, and reality of refugees borders are changing people, exchanging conquer the land crossing over dead child's body became universal rule seems like black and white aren't so different as they preach they are both monochromatic

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Eric Boddie

Date: 8/7/2015 12:20:00 PM

evil has no color....it corrupts us all, one after the other....and without the power we will surely fall....this is saddening but so true, please accept my applause....;)

Sanja Cokolic
Date: 8/10/2015 6:01:00 AM

it has no color, but has that habit to borrow them according the purpose :))

Hannington Mumo

Date: 5/1/2015 2:41:00 AM

You have over-delivered here. I like it from the beginning to the end..

Sanja Cokolic
Date: 5/1/2015 4:27:00 AM

thank you :)

Ronald Wheeler

Date: 4/12/2015 2:59:00 AM

Nice work! A lot of depth...

Sanja Cokolic
Date: 4/12/2015 6:12:00 AM

Thank you :)

Sandip Goswami

Date: 4/7/2015 2:37:00 PM

Very deep thoughts. keep it up dear. Best wishes from India.

Sanja Cokolic
Date: 4/8/2015 2:38:00 AM

Thank you :)

Kamran Rashid

Date: 4/7/2015 12:52:00 PM

became universal rule.. they are both monochromatic borders are changing people dream of home, and reality of refugees #HOW YOU GET to think such deep..if one reads it with a heart so neat i will say he is gonna weep..truth is all i can c in u

Sanja Cokolic
Date: 4/7/2015 2:01:00 PM

Maybe I'm old soul born in wrong time ... I sure feel sometimes like that ;) thank you for your nice words :)

Kamran Rashid

Date: 4/7/2015 9:15:00 AM

AND i can just saY,,reading these lines for once was like seeing my own reflection talking in front of me#we are the world and the world is for us ...hope u shine Sanja here and hereafter...luvd reading this...kp me posted about what u write and let me know about where i m wrong..tkyouu for reading and commenting on my stuff...#lpr@krb --burningsoulz