The Line

borders are shaping lives,
impersonating

color of your body
cleanliness of your soul
transparency of your mind
need to fit the frame

borders are ingesting destinies,
devouring

caught in that osmosis draft
they are playing russian roulette
with your need for bed and meal
in which only prize for you is
dream of home, and reality of refugees

borders are changing people,
exchanging

conquer the land
crossing over dead child's body
became universal rule
seems like black and white aren't so different as they preach

they are both monochromatic

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/7/2015 12:20:00 PM
evil has no color....it corrupts us all, one after the other....and without the power we will surely fall....this is saddening but so true, please accept my applause....;)
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Sanja Cokolic
Date: 8/10/2015 6:01:00 AM
it has no color, but has that habit to borrow them according the purpose :))
Date: 5/1/2015 2:41:00 AM
You have over-delivered here. I like it from the beginning to the end..
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Sanja Cokolic
Date: 5/1/2015 4:27:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 4/12/2015 2:59:00 AM
Nice work! A lot of depth...
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Sanja Cokolic
Date: 4/12/2015 6:12:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/7/2015 2:37:00 PM
Very deep thoughts. keep it up dear. Best wishes from India.
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Sanja Cokolic
Date: 4/8/2015 2:38:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/7/2015 12:52:00 PM
became universal rule.. they are both monochromatic borders are changing people dream of home, and reality of refugees #HOW YOU GET to think such deep..if one reads it with a heart so neat i will say he is gonna weep..truth is all i can c in u
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Sanja Cokolic
Date: 4/7/2015 2:01:00 PM
Maybe I'm old soul born in wrong time ... I sure feel sometimes like that ;) thank you for your nice words :)
Date: 4/7/2015 9:15:00 AM
AND i can just saY,,reading these lines for once was like seeing my own reflection talking in front of me#we are the world and the world is for us ...hope u shine Sanja here and hereafter...luvd reading this...kp me posted about what u write and let me know about where i m wrong..tkyouu for reading and commenting on my stuff...#lpr@krb --burningsoulz
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