The Line

Patiently they stand in a line
As it stretches a block or more
For the food doled out to homeless,
To the old, the young and the poor.

I wonder how each came to be 
In that line that moves so slow.
Each person has his own story
Thought it’s one we may never know.

One perhaps a hard working man
With good job for whole adult life.
Who lost  his job in recession.
He can’t care for children and wife.

Medicine costs have been so high
For the old man who has been ill.
He and his wife have no money
To buy food their hunger to still.

There may have been a disaster
That brought some to this sorry state.
Many are only a pay check away
From suffering very same fate.

I hope when elections are over 
It matters not which side has won,
The congressmen will remember
There is a big job to be done.

Hunger in America should
Be first on the list not the last.
Long lines waiting for donated food
Must soon be a shame of the past.


For Paula Swanson's "Line" contest
5th place
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K. Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 12:22 PM
Congrats on your contemplative poem, Joyce! You've touched on a topic that should really be given more awareness to-- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 9:16 PM
You chose such a relevent topic, Joyce. Congratulations on your very fine win. LUv, Andrea
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 11:57 AM
Joyce, your poem really deserves to be in the winner's circle. It has an important meaningful message, especially your last stanza. Congratulations! I put this one into my fav's. Love, Connie
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 6:59 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Paula Swanson's contest "Line". Love, Carol
Bagnall Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 4:38 AM
At least where there is a line there is hope, somebody has decided to help, a very poinient poem - congrats on you placement in this contest
Devonshire Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 4:33 AM
Bread lines emerged during the Great Depression and their reappearance in recent years is evidence of how much people are struggling to survive in today's economy. Indeed, we should make feeding our fellow Americans a top priority. It riles me when I think of how much money is sent to other countries for "humanitarian aid" when we have people here who need our help so desperately. Congratulations on your well deserved win, Joyce! Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 9:48 PM
Timely write..congrats on your win in the contest. BG
Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 9:27 PM
wonderful entry, congrats on your win in the contest
Mannan Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 8:58 PM
A very touching and beautiful poem. many congratulations on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 5:59 PM
Congrats Joyce on your win in the Line contest.. another great write and win to enjoy with luv my friend..
Mehta Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Joyce
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 11:28 PM
Joyce, this is truly a tribute to those whose lives have changed so drastically with the economy and joblessness on the rise. A poem that conveys a heartfelt sense of kinship with those in need who hunger. My applause. I am sure your poem will do well in Paula's contest. Blessings, Connie
Mehta Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 4:49 AM
A wonderful write on the theme of line, Joyce. Good luck
Wilson Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 11:03 PM
very thoughtful story of a big problem in this country..well done Joyce! Take care~Deb
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