The Lilith Kiss

"The Lilith Kiss"
One kiss the Godot thorns lift Trouble arrives opening Pandora’s gift (LadyLabyrinth / 2021)
"Lips Like Sugar" / Echo and the Bunnymen https://youtu.be/wnfdbYtj1ZU
LYRICS / "Lips Like Sugar", Echo & the Bunnymen https://genius.com/Echo-and-the-bunnymen-lips-like-sugar-lyrics https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pandora https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lilith https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Waiting_for_Godot
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Gauthier Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 3:08 PM
Congrats on your POTD, Lady ~ deep and intriguing as always ~
Labyrinth Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 5:12 PM
Thank you Line. Trust you are well. :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 11:00 AM
A potent little poem. Congratulations on POTD! Lilith is never far from my mind. xomo
Labyrinth Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 1:44 PM
Thank you. I know you and Lilith have a special relationship. ;) was just waiting for you to come into the discussion. Kafka is another very interesting character. On with the day McGreavy. x
Lindley Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 7:41 AM
My dear friend, even in brevity your thought, breadth, beauty shines in your creations. As gifted offerings and gems that do poetry proud. Such that leads this poet to oft be so inspired as to write even on one of my bad days. Beauty, a gem, a great fav.. God bless...
Labyrinth Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 2:36 PM
Lindley, I will look back at it all one day soon and understand, that some of my worst days were my best. Poets and writers are solitary figures for the most part, some can be humorously garrulous externally - internally it is really all about 'connection' with the I Am (take that whichever way you will, self, higher source) and reaching out to other like minded souls. Connection. Much love and much victory to your Queen - your son and yourself. xx
Stathakis Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 1:00 AM
Love the message. Well done!
Labyrinth Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 7:28 AM
Efharisto...apols if I got that one wrong! Thank you George.
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 12:40 AM
Congrats on POTD! unique poem, I had to research the background to try and understand its full impact! This is like an espresso of poems, a powerful shot!
Labyrinth Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 7:29 AM
I think it could be read many ways...;) Thank you Krish.
Fenn Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 5:43 PM
Congratulations! I like the mysterious tone of this poem.
Labyrinth Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 7:34 AM
Thanks Jennifer. x
La France Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Lady Labyrinth, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY, love _Constance
Labyrinth Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Merci, Mme La France. x
Peck Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 10:08 AM
Nice poem! Congrats on POTW!
Labyrinth Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 3:26 PM
Thank you Anne. A new name, I shall have to go visit your stories. x
Michael Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 9:22 AM
A priceless diamond here...Congratulations Lady Labyrinth on POTD...
Labyrinth Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 3:28 PM
Thank you Arturo - broken people are the shiniest diamonds, there is a story behind all characters I research, characters like Lilith have been greatly misunderstood, their lives interpreted without facts and written incorrectly into history. Much love. x
Goldsmith Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 7:51 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Few words with much said. Once opened watch out. Have a blessed day writing away................
Labyrinth Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Indeed Lady Goldsmith. Thank you. Much love. x
Riabi Dziri Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 7:48 AM
An immense pleasure to read such wonderful and unique poetry! Congratulations, Lady Labyrinth on your POTD honour! My deepest regards and blessings.
Labyrinth Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 3:30 PM
Thank you Besma. I read between all lines here in the poetries and stories of others (and comments). Some people write because they must. They must be nurtured and ecouraged and regarded with open minds, kindness, care and respect. xx
Poetry Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 6:04 PM
Trouble arrives in many forms
Labyrinth Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 3:38 PM
Thanks Schmidt. This aint getting the 1500 word completed.
Poetry Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 12:46 PM
Congratulations Modesty or shall I say Lilith
Labyrinth Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 6:12 PM
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