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The Lilith Kiss

"The Lilith Kiss" One kiss the Godot thorns lift Trouble arrives opening Pandora’s gift (LadyLabyrinth / 2021) "Lips Like Sugar" / Echo and the Bunnymen https://youtu.be/wnfdbYtj1ZU LYRICS / "Lips Like Sugar", Echo & the Bunnymen https://genius.com/Echo-and-the-bunnymen-lips-like-sugar-lyrics https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pandora https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lilith https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Waiting_for_Godot

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/18/2021 3:08:00 PM

Congrats on your POTD, Lady ~ deep and intriguing as always ~

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/18/2021 5:12:00 PM

Thank you Line. Trust you are well. :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/12/2021 11:00:00 AM

A potent little poem. Congratulations on POTD! Lilith is never far from my mind. xomo

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/12/2021 1:44:00 PM

Thank you. I know you and Lilith have a special relationship. ;) was just waiting for you to come into the discussion. Kafka is another very interesting character. On with the day McGreavy. x

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/11/2021 7:41:00 AM

My dear friend, even in brevity your thought, breadth, beauty shines in your creations. As gifted offerings and gems that do poetry proud. Such that leads this poet to oft be so inspired as to write even on one of my bad days. Beauty, a gem, a great fav.. God bless...

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/11/2021 2:36:00 PM

Lindley, I will look back at it all one day soon and understand, that some of my worst days were my best. Poets and writers are solitary figures for the most part, some can be humorously garrulous externally - internally it is really all about 'connection' with the I Am (take that whichever way you will, self, higher source) and reaching out to other like minded souls. Connection. Much love and much victory to your Queen - your son and yourself. xx

George Yiorgos Stathakis

Date: 4/11/2021 1:00:00 AM

Love the message. Well done!

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/11/2021 7:28:00 AM

Efharisto...apols if I got that one wrong! Thank you George.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 4/11/2021 12:40:00 AM

Congrats on POTD! unique poem, I had to research the background to try and understand its full impact! This is like an espresso of poems, a powerful shot!

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/11/2021 7:29:00 AM

I think it could be read many ways...;) Thank you Krish.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 4/10/2021 5:43:00 PM

Congratulations! I like the mysterious tone of this poem.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/11/2021 7:34:00 AM

Thanks Jennifer. x

Constance La France

Date: 4/10/2021 1:26:00 PM

Lady Labyrinth, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY, love _Constance

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/10/2021 3:25:00 PM

Merci, Mme La France. x

Ann Peck

Date: 4/10/2021 10:08:00 AM

Nice poem! Congrats on POTW!

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/10/2021 3:26:00 PM

Thank you Anne. A new name, I shall have to go visit your stories. x

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/10/2021 9:22:00 AM

A priceless diamond here...Congratulations Lady Labyrinth on POTD...

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/10/2021 3:28:00 PM

Thank you Arturo - broken people are the shiniest diamonds, there is a story behind all characters I research, characters like Lilith have been greatly misunderstood, their lives interpreted without facts and written incorrectly into history. Much love. x

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/10/2021 7:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Few words with much said. Once opened watch out. Have a blessed day writing away................

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/10/2021 3:29:00 PM

Indeed Lady Goldsmith. Thank you. Much love. x

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/10/2021 7:48:00 AM

An immense pleasure to read such wonderful and unique poetry! Congratulations, Lady Labyrinth on your POTD honour! My deepest regards and blessings.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/10/2021 3:30:00 PM

Thank you Besma. I read between all lines here in the poetries and stories of others (and comments). Some people write because they must. They must be nurtured and ecouraged and regarded with open minds, kindness, care and respect. xx

Ts Poetry

Date: 4/9/2021 6:04:00 PM

Trouble arrives in many forms

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/10/2021 3:38:00 PM

Thanks Schmidt. This aint getting the 1500 word completed.

Ts Poetry
Date: 4/10/2021 12:46:00 PM

Congratulations Modesty or shall I say Lilith

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/9/2021 6:12:00 PM

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