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The Lighthouse Recounts a Tale - Story Poem

Do you think I can save all ships in distress?
How wrong you are! Times when I sorely pressed,
Times when my beacon was snuffed out of its glory.
Oh, I can tell you many an adventurous story,
Exciting exploits on the tumultuous and stormy seas
High waves span all around me, ugly with a heavy breeze.

Still, there’s one I would sincerely like to show,
Although it happened a long time ago.
The Greyhound had a young master, rich and mean,
And he dared cross the sea, oh what a scene.

The winds were high and the sky was overcast
Waves were high and terrible. The ship could not last.
Aboard the vessel, I saw the master of the merchant ship,
Carrying slaves and other goods, was a doomed deplorable trip.

Above the dim of wicked waves, clangs of iron I heard,
And screams intermixed with every offensive word.
The man drenched held to the mast, knelt and prayed
Let them be saved, he would renounce his trade.

Years passed and the man gladly his faith he did embrace.
He vowed he’d fight slavery with his “Amazing Grace”.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write/picture. Love your ending and the song. Have a great day....................
Roper Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Back with congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend , please get well
Roper Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Back with congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend , please get well
Alex Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:37 AM
Brave man. Congratulations!
Daniel Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 1:19 AM
Wonderful story of the lighthouse, Victor, and I like how you connected it with John Newton's life, congratulations:)
Romios Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 8:49 PM
Hello Victor. I really appreciated the high drama you penned here. The ending has soulful whispers of gratitude, thank you. The seas have many tales to tell, don’t they? Panagiota
Messina Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 4:05 AM
Slavery has been for thousands of years...and you're right, it still exists today in other forms. Unfortunately, I don't think it will ever stop. Great write, Victor
George Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 9:15 PM
This story tells the wonderful transformation of a man from slave trader to an anti slavery supporter when touched by the grace of God. Beautiful, dear Victor
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 8:49 AM
Wonderful! To fight one’s own fight is to finally see the light of day. One’s actions contrary to the Creator now turn to Amazing Grace! God bless! Hugs!
Poet Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 6:25 AM
Victor, I must express my profound admiration for the felicitous twist in the denouement, wherein an unsung hero valiantly advocated for their emancipation. Your Narrative verse engrossed me wholly, and the sublime visual accompaniment you judiciously selected only augmented its splendor.
Tor Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 11:13 PM
Quite the story Victor. I can't imagine what those men went through in those boats rowing... Thanks for sharing...
Buhagiar Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 11:28 PM
The pity is that slavery in new forms, still exists. Blessings.
Roper Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 6:07 PM
very inspiring verse... having faith
Buehler Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 4:55 PM
A well narrated tale of a change of heart and redemption. Blessings
Baker Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 3:35 PM
A touching tale of the power of a great storm to change a man. Old ways passed away and all things became knew, once his prauers were answered by the Master of the sea. I enjoyed your Narrative poem, Victor, and the great photo you matched with it. Enjoy you day, my friend. Bill
Kiser Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 1:52 PM
A unique story of this man, I love the sea and lighthouses; well crafted with feeling.
Pandit Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 5:41 AM
I like the uplifting turn in the end, Victor. Glad someone fought for them to set them free.
M  Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 4:59 AM
Wonderful Lighthouse tale Victor! I just love lighthouses! Cuddles ….Debx
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 1:38 AM
- He was lucky ... unbelievably many who got their graves in the sea ... - He kept his promise to God and live a better life ... a great story with a lovely message, Victor :) - hugs
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