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The Lighthouse - Lighthouse Rhopalic Verse Contest

The coastal lighthouses, intervening
in many dangerous undercurrents. 
it's beacon interacts vigorously 
as vessel realigns, manoeuvring
past many obstacles undistinguished 
by any obvious visionary. 
So sailing faultlessly, continuing 
home without treacherous impediments



Penned 19 September 2014 by Seren Roberts

Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2014

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Nette Onclaud Date: 9/29/2014 7:33:00 AM a well-made piece despite its challenging form, seren..my pleasure to have you in my contest with thanks and big congrats! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/30/2014 5:26:00 PM Thank you for your encouragement Nette....Seren

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 9/28/2014 6:49:00 PM Congratulations Seren on your winning well done poem. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/30/2014 5:27:00 PM Thank you Brenda, was a bit trying to do ....Seren

Mark J. Halliday Date: 9/28/2014 12:28:00 PM I agree with Maurice--yours did flow well. Those 4-syllable end-lines were a pain, but your didn't come across too forced. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/28/2014 7:55:00 PM Thank u Mark .....Seren

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/28/2014 11:51:00 AM I really like yours Seren because it flows so well within the restrictions of the form. One of the few that does. Congratulations on your win. You more then deserved it. Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/30/2014 6:48:00 PM I would never say that to anyone as kind as you. However it is a good line. You made me laugh. Seren Roberts Date: 9/30/2014 5:28:00 PM Thanks Maurice,I do try , go on say it, I am very trying ....lol ...Seren

Jan Allison Date: 9/28/2014 6:31:00 AM dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan x Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/30/2014 5:29:00 PM Thanks Jan for your comments and congrats ...Seren

Tim Smith Date: 9/28/2014 6:25:00 AM A nice win.Seren...congrats Tim Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/30/2014 5:29:00 PM Ty Tim ....Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/28/2014 6:23:00 AM Dropping back to congratulate you, Seren Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/30/2014 5:30:00 PM Ty Ram ....Seren

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/20/2014 1:10:00 PM thanks , seren.. soupie for you.. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/20/2014 2:27:00 PM thanks Nette ....Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/19/2014 9:29:00 AM Your muse nowadays is in full bloom saring us your poetic talent, Seren. you need no good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/19/2014 10:34:00 AM Ram I wish, i struggled with this one...Seren

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/19/2014 9:09:00 AM Really really really really good. It should rank high in the contest. You are a marvelous poet. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/19/2014 10:34:00 AM awww Maurice your so kind, am not so sure if its right....Seren

Jan Allison Date: 9/19/2014 8:55:00 AM wow Seren you have nailed this form! Good luck for the contest will take me ages to write one this good! Hugs jan xx Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/19/2014 10:33:00 AM Jan I found it a pigs ear to write, not sure if i have done it right even...Seren