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The Lighthouse - Lighthouse Rhopalic Verse Contest

The coastal lighthouses, intervening in many dangerous undercurrents. it's beacon interacts vigorously as vessel realigns, manoeuvring past many obstacles undistinguished by any obvious visionary. So sailing faultlessly, continuing home without treacherous impediments Penned 19 September 2014 by Seren Roberts

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/29/2014 7:33:00 AM

a well-made piece despite its challenging form, seren..my pleasure to have you in my contest with thanks and big congrats!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/30/2014 5:26:00 PM

Thank you for your encouragement Nette....Seren

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/28/2014 6:49:00 PM

Congratulations Seren on your winning well done poem.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/30/2014 5:27:00 PM

Thank you Brenda, was a bit trying to do ....Seren

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 9/28/2014 12:28:00 PM

I agree with Maurice--yours did flow well. Those 4-syllable end-lines were a pain, but your didn't come across too forced.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/28/2014 7:55:00 PM

Thank u Mark .....Seren

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/28/2014 11:51:00 AM

I really like yours Seren because it flows so well within the restrictions of the form. One of the few that does. Congratulations on your win. You more then deserved it.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/30/2014 6:48:00 PM

I would never say that to anyone as kind as you. However it is a good line. You made me laugh.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/30/2014 5:28:00 PM

Thanks Maurice,I do try , go on say it, I am very trying ....lol ...Seren