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The Light

My father left this rocky coast Upon a southbound brigantine; To make his fortune, he did boast, Six months along the Argentine. A lighthouse lit our lonely cove For more than fifty years in all. The beacon of my mother’s love N’er quenched a night, as I recall. Long have I scanned the sky; My sons have come and gone. I cry: “O, who shall carry on the light That shone in mother’s eyes, so bright?”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/11/2019 9:06:00 PM
Lovely, David. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 2/6/2019 9:54:00 AM
I can tell that your mother was a special person who touched on the lives of her family with great love. Congrats on your winning work. Sara
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Date: 2/1/2019 7:29:00 PM
David, we meet again! You've packed a lot into these 3 stanzas. Going from "A lighthouse lit our lonely cove" to "The beacon of my mother's love N'er quenched a night" Brilliant! In more ways than one :) Congratulations on your win on mile 15 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Date: 1/22/2019 11:03:00 PM
I feel very moved by this. It makes me imagine your mother walking down to the shore, to look for him, never coming home. 'O, who shall carry on the light/That shone in mother's eyes, so bright?' Truly, it is for those who see the need, to bring the love! Beautifully expressed!
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Date: 12/18/2018 10:04:00 PM
This poem is very touching and beautifully written, David. I really enjoyed it!
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Date: 12/2/2018 7:39:00 PM
David, enjoyed reading your poem, congratulations on your 1st place win.
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Date: 11/26/2018 8:02:00 PM
David, enjoyed reading.. it really is very nicely done...
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Date: 6/14/2018 8:35:00 PM
Beautiful
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