The Life of a Thug

I live a life of 
poverty.

Crucified for the 
color of my skin.

Minimum wage 
ain't pay ****, 
so I resort to a
life of crime...

Victimize all who 
become my prey.

I didn't choose 
to live life this way,
but society has turn 
me into what they 
profile me to be...

A menace to society.

I'm a thug raised 
in the streets, 
where one wrong 
move will get you 
shot.

Cross me once,
and that's your life 
son.

I live by the gun,
and I will die by 
one.

Written by: Poet Shi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Wilcox Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 8:35 PM
Hey Poet Shi,I was really feeling this One...You expressed The Hood just as good as the late great Tupac. Very nice write and You could write Songs from these writes.Do not ever ever stop writing...Your very Good,Sir...Thank You for Sharing Your Own unique Style with Me..Very much appreciated...You excelled writer You,lol!
Wilcox Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 9:46 PM
My friends call Me Char and My Son enjoyed it too...He has very good taste in this style of writing and He said that it was banging Awesome...
Shi Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 9:12 PM
Thank you very much Charlene
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July 14, 2014 at 10:58 PM
No Problem :)
A   Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 10:52 PM
Poet Shi, , I'm passing by to say hi, and thank you for the reply, you left on the comment I left below... XOX~ LINDA
Shi Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 10:58 PM
You're welcome
A  Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 8:20 PM
I love it, Poet Shi,,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Shi Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 8:32 PM
Thank u
Gibson Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 3:02 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Poet. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
A   Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 9:12 PM
WOW~!~ Poet Shi, why so blunt? Love it, I live by the light, and I too will die by it... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Shi Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 10:08 PM
Thank you I will check it out soon.
A   Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 9:13 PM
ps... I enjoy poems, that are powerful, and filled with truth... Linda
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July 2, 2014 at 8:13 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Poet Shi - Already posted many poems :)- I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. -// Anne-Lise :)
Shi Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 8:31 AM
Thank you will do
Merritt Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 8:30 PM
This is real, Shi. I have spent quite some time around those who live the thug life, as short as it is for far too many. This is their voice. I just pray you've moved on. Good job and welcome to Poetry Soup.
Shi Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 5:59 AM
Thank you
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