Sotto Poet Poet Sonnet

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The Life Cycle

Mute and fastidious enlivening womb,
Blood red zygote is tied in a strange bloom.
Umbilical strands, mysterious quagmire.
Once undetectable vitality is now seed hire. 

Wrapped in the space of a narrow room.
Elusive shelter from the entire doom.
Antepartum life, nourishing advertently,
Swiftly evolving forms and lines reliantly.

Enclose the embryonic kid with affection.
For a while, surely keep it safe till inception.
Right to be born, to exist, to suck in air 
Renewed spirit and a drive to live and dare.

Kids recalled mother's voice from the womb.
No one knows his death date or his tomb.


Written: March 25, 2022

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Valsa George March 26, 2022 at 9:15 PM 'Wrapped in the space of a narrow room. Elusive shelter from the entire doom'...... A beautiful description of a mother's womb ! Altogether the formation of a fetus and its growth and inception are powerfully and beautifully presented ! A lovely sonnet, dear Lasaad !

Bill Baker March 26, 2022 at 3:09 PM Beautiful poem of a beautiful experience, for both mother and developing child. A blessing in the making and a miracle in deliverance. Thanks for sharing your eloquent poetry, Sotto. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill

Sara Kendrick March 26, 2022 at 2:32 PM From before conception until the grave in a neatly woven poem. I enjoyed reading this one today. I am glad that I chose it as one of the ones I could read today. Your visit to my poem was delightful. Sara