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The Lie

The Lie Has this candle lit vandal come tearing its lament To augment such weary marches of sorrow All weeping configured the fingers of fate To turn molded clay to the empty vessel of a soul Heartless gold plated grinning reminder Of shattered silk doors of sin Thrown wide to deceitful imperious walls Where scratched each breath of hope and denied the softest touch Foul echo of triumph born by flightless wings Its truce delivered on the drunken mutterings of fools Nailed in their fickle easy clamouring For tasteless gilded shells and inconsequent meaning By mediocrity dazzled in consummate tears So readily bloated fall in their thick passages of treasure Broken amidst perfumery and powders wasteland of plastic Triumphant beguiling of salvation The perceiving vista procured to grand a compromise Belittled in the preference of trash Agreeing on indistinct monuments And shunned the solitary deliverance of truth Inescapable nondescript insipid vandals Bemoaning their wretched use And defiled by fate their heartless whit To ignorance is made consummate All proposal of the innocent Gathered to worshipful psalms On a blankets bland demand of deceit

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/20/2008 1:16:00 PM
Hello, again, Colin! I concur that all lies possess elements of truth perverted to suit the liar's ends. Wrap your head around this quote: "The bigger the lie the more people will believe it." Take a guess who offered this one, then see how the Fourth Reich here in America has taken that baton and run with it in light of the crimes of 9/11. Again, I can't state clearly enough how potent the message on this poem reads. Bravo, Colin! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 11/19/2008 8:46:00 AM
This work proves strong and committed! I love the chopped ending; it hammers home with immense clarity the cosmic deception of the ages. "Blankets bland demand of deceit" is a phenomenal turn of phrase that sums up the distain perfectly. Excellent write, Mr. Williams! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 11/18/2008 1:38:00 PM
Colin I'm very honest person. Your level of poetry exceed's my understanding. You my friend are in a special class of writer's on this one. I applaud your use of the english laguage. I'm ashamed I fail to grasp this one but I am honest about it and I don't like to just post comment's for the sake of it. I hope you can forgive me for being honest. Michael Torres
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