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The Lewd Dude

There was a man who searched for the oasis
But was lacking in the social graces
He’d splash on some musk
But then acted brusque
By looking for love in all the thong places

Copyright © David Fisher | Year Posted 2023

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September 15, 2023 at 9:57 PM

oops, a spelling error....oh, I see what you did there!! cheers, :o)

September 9, 2023 at 4:18 PM

Making me smile so it must be another funny Limerick, David. Thanks for the smile my friend. Cheers! Bill

September 6, 2023 at 2:52 PM

I'm wearing musk.

Panagiota Romios

August 31, 2023 at 8:09 PM

Well written and outstanding quip in that last line, Panagiota xx

August 31, 2023 at 2:14 PM

Nicely done David, a true limerick, thanks for the chuckle

August 31, 2023 at 1:56 PM

enjoyed, reading this final line and all, smiles

August 31, 2023 at 1:16 PM

Yep! I think he did lack in social graces. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing the humor and for dropping by my page. Sara

August 30, 2023 at 7:20 PM

lol. Good one, David!

August 30, 2023 at 7:19 PM

LOL… Yes, I agree with Jan on the last line. Fantastic, David. Hope you don’t mind but I’m printing this one out for work tomorrow. :)

August 31, 2023 at 10:53 AM

Glad you liked it, Akkina. And yes, print away, thanks!

August 30, 2023 at 6:09 PM

ha ha ha that final line is priceless lol xx

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