The Letter

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The Letter

A letter fell from heaven and it landed at my door.
The letter had a message - Cry for me no more.
As I was reading the message, I knew it came
from you.

Where do the souls of our love ones go when they
leave this world? We cry, we suffer and our hearts
are broken, because we won't see them anymore.

The days pass and the months, soon turn into years.
Little by little the pain becomes less. But we still ask 
ourselves - where do the souls go?

The souls go to their destiny. God has a special place
for them. We want to think that everything ends here-
that one day we just go to sleep and we wake up
in a beautiful place called heaven.

I know now that you are in heaven and that you also
watch over me. One day when God calls me - we will 
reunite again. You say that you are happy, that you
feel no more pain.

You tell me not to worry, to go on with my life. This is
just what I will do and whenever I feel sad - I will open
up the letter and read the message again. It is time to
say - good bye dear - I have a smile on my face, because
now I know that you are in a very special place...


Written   03/31/2012      
  by Lucilla M. Carrillo

For Lisa Haitt Dark Poetess  Contest  ( Letting Go )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lyle Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 1:19 AM
Beautiful sad write Lucilla. this earth is just a testing place for all the souls of the human race. Yes the agony fades but the beautiful memories live on, take care Lucilla hope your health improves. God Bless you.. Andy
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April 11, 2014 at 2:14 AM
Thank you Andy; I wrote this After I lost my husband. It will be 5 years on this coming thanksgiving. Thank you for reading. about my health - I'm still waiting. I thank my Lord Jesus for all the friends and all the prayers. Many blessings... Lucilla
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October 12, 2012 at 2:38 PM
Reading some of your "old" poem tonight. Pleased I found this. - A loss that will always be in your heart Lucilla. - Touching but beautifully written. - - Have a nice weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 2:14 PM
Congrats on your well deserved first place win! Yours are beautiful and comforting words. Blessings, Rhonda
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 2:14 PM
And congrats on your first win'
Pettit Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 11:04 AM
Congratulations on your first place finish in this contest. This deserved to be at the top of the list.
Carrillo Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 11:38 AM
Thank you Robert, I didn't know that I won. Thanks for reading my poem too. Lucilla
Sweetheart Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 10:14 AM
congrats Lucilla on a wonderful win for first place for letting go luv..
Carrillo Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 11:40 AM
Thank you Linda marie. This was my first time that I entered a poem. Lucilla
Richards Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 8:25 AM
Beautiful....this could be lyrics to a wonderful song! Well done, a big congratulations!
Carrillo Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 11:42 AM
Thank you, you all are so nice. Lucilla
Prabhu Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 7:56 AM
wow!!!!!!congrats on the top placement in the "letting go" contest......~sashi
Carrillo Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 11:43 AM
thank you too for having read my poem. Lucilla
Brown Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 7:35 AM
Congratulations on your win in Lisa's "Letting Go" contest Lucilla. Love, Carol
Carrillo Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 11:46 AM
Hi Carol; I finally see your picture. You are very pretty. Thank you for all the comments that you have on my poems. Many blessings. Lucilla
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April 2, 2012 at 9:29 PM
This is one special letter- very lovely Lucilla and all the very best, brenda : )
Carrillo Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 7:08 AM
Thank you very much. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Lucilla
Sweetheart Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 10:46 AM
amazing Lucilla.. the part where we leave Earth and wake up in Heaven.. is truly gifted line .. good luck in contest luv.. this is a winner .. a wow wonder of a write luv..
Carrillo Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 10:57 AM
Thankyou so much. This really means so much for me. God Bless. Lucilla
Johnson Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 10:43 PM
Yes your poem is very much like mine in theme. It is hard to let them go, but they need to find blessed peace. Thank you for your comments. Lucilla. Good luck. Love, Joyce
Carrillo Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 11:00 AM
Hi Joyce; I am just learning how to reply to the comments. Thank you very much for reading my poetry. You yourself write very beautiful. God bless you. Lucilla
K Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 10:07 PM
Beautiful Lucilla :) good luck in the contest
Carrillo Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 11:49 AM
Hi jessica; I just found out that I won. Lucilla
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