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THE LENTINI CURSE

THE LENTINI CURSE A moment please, as I try to think upon it A number of rules to apply in fourteen lines It seems that it could be one form of sonnet Four lines per stanza that a quatrain defines If paid by the word, such a pity it’s not billable For the poetic accountant, a natural proclivity The time cost is counting every damn syllable It ends up as a dampener on one’s creativity Please note there’s the petty rules of rhyme And it must also end with a two line refrain Some may even say that it’s a waste of time I’m not too sure that I’ll write another again So I’ll wrap it up now, at least for this session As it really hampers my freedom of expression

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Date: 3/7/2024 3:39:00 PM
Congrats on placing 11th out of 30 entries. You shoud've been ranked 7th, but I forgot to list a 7th, which I think is beautifully ironic considering it's all about the anxiety of the submitter getting it "perfect." Sometimes the judge is flawed. This was tight, perfect, and funny, should've been higher, but I'm still learning to be a better judge myself. :)
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Date: 2/5/2024 5:20:00 PM
brilliant! genius! creative! You've turned the tables on 'rules'; I loved the read! Have to fave this one for sure...have a creative evening, Sara
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Date: 2/5/2024 12:56:00 AM
A bit like a three-legged race in some contests... I don't stand a chance in contests calling for standard English or Italian sonnets, with their strict rules and regulations. I almost excpect the contest to include: "T & C apply" :) I enjoyed this metapoetry, Howard.
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