The Legacy of Light ~

We all have a legacy, which we shall all eventually leave behind

Yet how shall it read, within its epitome or epitaph?

As I beheld these words, their writings

I could tell that they were brought forth from ones soul....

While sitting by this peaceful brooke, of serenities everflow

Wrapped in the warmth of Heavens graceful tide

Contemplating, what remarks I could render

In reposed reply unto it all, from the depths of my heart

To the hopeful sanctum of their own?

Often I have turned, shunning the false perceptions of greatness

Within the eyes of the world....

Always pointing away from the created, to 'The Creator'

To lift this candle of truth, unto, the fountain of praise deserved

Wherefore do I find these gifts of others, which I have professed!

But first, I must turn unto my very own soul....

Beholding them beyond the stagnant mirrors of conception

Wherein the clouds of vague, do they often reside?

Kneeling atop this bank, and dipping my hands beneath the shallow waters

Exhuming therefrom what treasures, which these my open palms may find....

As I ponder what breath do we take that is lasting, in this our world?

And what impacts upon others, if any, will this their write leave behind? 

This story, the ultimate question, to the honest answer, that I shall hold!

For to live only unto thyself, I have often considered, believed

Is but to slowly bleed, the inevitable death, of ones very own life....

Yet to offer it unto others, while you walk, you breathe, you live

Is, truly wealth beyond any measure~crossing the barriers of trident time

So what do I say in response, to these words which I have read?

As I turn to the purest source of truth, now standing before my eyes!    

Let me speak not, before this reflection of thought reflected

Has been brushed by this glow of reason, these reasons that I find

Searching for, within their writings, this response unto....

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The Legacy of Light ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/3/2011 11:07:00 PM
Jesus and I'd say, 'I want to see where you keep the rain'. (don't laugh at me, but I still do.)lol I want to flyaway to every corner of the earth when I go home, see the highest peaks, just like the mighty eagles! Ok let me end here before I go rambling on. Blessings and a good night to you. Have a real nice day tomorrow, John! Love, audrey
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Date: 1/3/2011 11:02:00 PM
Beauty and truth, again, dear John! Very often we desire to bring praise to our God but there's always a chance, if we're not careful, to get in between what we write and the praise which is his by right. I pray that my legacy will be things, words of Light to honor Him, so deserving of all the glory, love and honor. I know that I can never ever pay back what I owe, still I'd like to sit at his feet one day. Since I was young, I'd while daydreaming, I'd pretend to be speaking with cont'd
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Date: 3/4/2009 10:39:00 PM
All these thngs we write to share our knowledge, our insights, our feelings with the world. I lke to thnk these words will live on and touch hearts long after I'm gone. This is a very dee and thought provoking piece, John! "The Legacy of Light" is such a beautiful title. Thank you for your kind words and for sharing your insights. I hope you are well! (Acts 2:16-21) God bless you always, John! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/20/2009 7:43:00 PM
Very thoughtful poetry, John. A legacy of light would indeed be the kind we wish to leave behind. And I do feel we all have an impact in this world. Much wisdom in "For to live only unto thyself...Is but to slowly bleed, the inevitable death of one's very own life." I always appreciate your comments, especially because they come from such a good writer. Unfortunately, I am not well tonight and just stopped by to check my mail. Pleasant dreams, John. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/5/2009 6:53:00 PM
John my Brother - Beautifully written piece and I just love the self reflection in this poem - God Bless, MJ
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