The Ledge

Every morning between 7:00 AM and 7:30 Am I f you looked through the bathroom window You would see a most beautiful sight. There were three deer on the ledge; Father, Mother, And Babe They would stand there for an hour Then they would go back into the woods You could set your watch by the deer on the ledge

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Skat A

Date: 4/16/2013 5:24:00 PM

Susan :-), Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2013 12:22:00 PM

Hi Susan - thank you for sharing your fine poem with me. - Welkommen to P-Soup, visiting other people's poems and send your comments and you will receive many visits to your poems. - You can share your words and poems, participate in contests, visit the blog, send personalized greetings or question in S-mail. - Have fun! - Good luck! - Have a nice weekend. - Love from Norway .... oxox / / Anne-Lise :)