The Laundromat

I enjoy watching
Clothes tumble in the dryer
At the laundromat;
It reminds me of sunset
And its swiftly changing hues.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 8:26 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jim. Love, Carol
Rodriguez Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 1:02 PM
if i went there i would always love making clothes clean and pretending i am in a used book store
Gorelick Avatar
November 2, 2008 at 4:52 PM
I can tell you look at your surroundings carefully..This is great..BG
Burton Avatar
August 2, 2008 at 12:58 PM
different ways the cloths fall,as well as rythems.great poem
Jordan Avatar
July 30, 2008 at 7:54 PM
Interesting - Great use of the form - Funny how we compare things in life sometimes - God Bless
Degenhardt Avatar
July 30, 2008 at 9:34 AM
Jim, this Tanka is perfectly executed in format and flow. Great details and terrifically clear. Michael
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