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The Laughing Moon

It's here now under a converted sky Where daylight has loss it’s might Hours before the green hills had sight, with splattered hints of yellow wild flowers so bright Now time has casts a different light It here now where the heavens sings an evening song With twinkled lights on a moon lit prong Dancing stars and dreaming of mars Its here on this transformed spot I will sit and jot It is here now as I lay back on this cool grass, and write a story with the heavens the color of quarry Of jeweled eyes in the skies that connected to stories, some disguised With silver spoons and astrological loons On dream away, dream on by to the earths motions and lullabies It is here now time to take a brake from life’s work ,and worries and heart ache Try it yourself remember when, you were a child when you looked up the night and smiled amen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/7/2008 8:20:00 PM
I like your style and the war you write your poems. Hope to read more of your poems. I see both passion and emotions behind your writes. Congrats.
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Date: 8/15/2008 11:14:00 AM
Enchanting and beautiful. I suppose we all need to remember the times when we were innocent and took pleasure in small things, our childhood, that is. Sometimes, I feel older than I really am, lol. Loved this cute piece. Love, Sara
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Date: 8/14/2008 7:15:00 PM
Nice use of personification in this poem. What an uplifting piece. Thanks for allowing me to smile with your words and for taking time to comment on my poem. Best wishes with your writing. Have a nice day! Karen
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Date: 8/14/2008 3:08:00 PM
I call these times, my quiet time...Beautiful, Always, Christy
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