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The Last Walk Together Shrouds cast purposed a dire malaise, inscribed plaudits hallow tombstones, absorbing bores coped brimmed blase, a raised veil, e'er wet-eyes stream blued, stays balanced, shifted acquiesce, resume pace, neglectful of mood, umbrae molds clear, a mien shone glit, poised calm prosed a pious meek speech, laid wreaths, last steps rounds a life flit. *Used HMS & RZ 2020 October 23 *3rd Place* Writing Challenge - Tercets ~~Constance La France

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Date: 11/1/2020 7:54:00 AM
William, congratulations on your win in my Tercet Challenge with this wonderful and very emotional write _Constance
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William Kekaula
Date: 11/1/2020 10:19:00 AM
Many thanks, Constance, for another wondrous challenge, Aloha!
Date: 11/1/2020 12:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, William. Hugs Eve
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William Kekaula
Date: 11/1/2020 12:16:00 AM
Thanks, Eve, and congrats on your poignant piece too, Aloha!
Date: 10/31/2020 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on the win William! :) Linda
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William Kekaula
Date: 10/31/2020 12:25:00 PM
Thanks, Linda, and congrats on your win too, Aloha!
Date: 10/31/2020 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. :-)
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William Kekaula
Date: 10/31/2020 12:25:00 PM
Thanks, Joanna, and congrats on your win too, Aloha!
Date: 10/31/2020 11:12:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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William Kekaula
Date: 10/31/2020 11:29:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, and congrats for your endearing win, Aloha!
Date: 10/31/2020 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win William!!
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William Kekaula
Date: 10/31/2020 11:30:00 AM
Thank you, Mark, and congrats for your endearing win, Aloha!
Date: 10/24/2020 6:03:00 AM
Your poem evokes voice of grief--as is the case in the last walk together. Splendid images you captured of the resting place, William.
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William Kekaula
Date: 10/24/2020 2:47:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, for your astute observations in your considerations my friend, Aloha! William