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The Last Visit

Remembering the last visit with my mother 
On the other side of the Pacific,
I brush salty tears under 
Tangled sea-swept hair.

Twenty years ago at the Oregon coast  
Pale legs slung over bleached logs, 
We looked to the water-- 
Sipping coffee, toes digging 
For common ground in the cold sand.

The waves did not stop.
We did not recognise the hourglass, 
The endless oceanic energy
Beckoning, calling her home. 

Last weekend I watched the waves
Wear away tiny footprints, 
Flooding remnants of the low-lying castle 
My children built before running, laughing 
From the swirling surf. 

Sand and wind polish my scars.
Warmth turns sand to glass  
And particles to pearls.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/11/2024 11:37:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/28/2016 9:04:00 AM
WELL DONE...LINDA
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