The Last Sacrifice

The Last Sacrifice



It plays a piano Grande 
Spiraling
Tones twist soft twistings relentless 
Chimes fluent rolling scarlet scales
Tinkling sacred chorales
From cherubim fingers
Plucked petaled folden harps

Of the ballerina swans mute vocals
I know to her return
I succumb
To the ever endless, endless rest
Tenured finally in her sacrifice
How the blood rips its way
To the last

Torn open at the seams
Behind the clenching of my fist
Raging at myself
As I fall faltering in her tears
The damned and hated hours
Every ounce of me can’t resist

While beyond 
Teasing digits pluck the melody
Pull the essence from her music
Reverberates to me
I am the caged animal
Inside her symphony
Bound to my own tether
Of what will be
Will be

Trace this line upon my heart
Trace this line upon her lips
Drag this shackle to the lightless dungeon
Where words become the bars of iron 
Written on the paper walls of my prison
Her face my only window
And her love 
The only Nocturne
Plays the tune spiraling from above
In the rhythms of my blood

Closed the rivet in the door
I chose my sentence long ago
Feed me on empty life
Tossed upon her naked floor
And leave me to rejoice
In the trackless chasms of my soul
Her face
My only window
This love
My only light
Plays upon a grand piano
The sheet music of my life

There within and endless vision
Beneath a golden tree
I succumb to endless rest
Finally understanding this sacrifice
And how this blood
Flows its own way to the last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/2/2009 10:33:00 AM
Colin, I can both hear and feel the music of your love in this wonderful poem! Great image conveyed in the last verse, succumbing "to endless rest." You certainly paint vivid pictures and express deep thoughts in your work. I'm a fan! And thanks for taking the time to read "The Mountain I Believed to Be Id."
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Date: 2/26/2009 12:48:00 PM
This is a powerful write Colin..so many strong images throughout the piece..very well done brother.
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Date: 2/26/2009 11:13:00 AM
What an eternal impalement of the heart. Sucks. Laurie
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