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The Last Plumeria Flowers

The last Plumeria flowers Robert Chung The fall equinox passed away a long ago I’m the last flower left over Early morning you stopped walking by Don't inquire of me why or how If briefing, I must not let the sunset depart Someday, missing me as passing by, You may chat with each other Through the night till dawn breaking

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Date: 2/24/2022 4:32:00 PM
Peaceful poems.enjoy mine.feedback please.peace.
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Date: 2/24/2022 1:37:00 PM
Strikes me as a "death" metaphor (time-framing), but the "depart"-ed speaker, experiencing the third personage ~ " . . . chat with each other", suggests an "after-life", which is ok.
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Date: 2/24/2022 6:40:00 AM
What beautiful personification poem you have written, Robert. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Elaine
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