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The Last Organ Grinder

Down the faithful brick stones he goes with his favorite monkey Spiff through the alley where twilight glints soon turn from pinkish to gold beneath a yawning sun. Bringing forth a new day, Tee Hee the nonpareil of his industry is an enigma to the passing crowds. An unravelled mystery that shows up at the break of dawn, and plays until the torches of a liquid day pour into lunchtime. Then the chink chink of coins arrive. At the drop of a hat they both perform, for the sake of a handful of coins. music is the haven of Kings an organ grinder's swing and a monkey's right wing A little orphan girl comes around with a small calico blue pie that she found in the dumpster both broken and mushed to the pulp. She sits herself down and with eyes round as frying pans she watches as the monkey brings the hat to his nose to chase away her woes Thrown like a star into a vast sleep she opens her eyes to take a peek Gazing at tranquility she falls in deep Hurdy gurdy, hurdy gurdy, hurdy gurdy gurdy he plays on, as if it were his song "Roly poly, roly poly, holy poly poly" he sings on All the street clowns disappear, and as time stands still, a young beating heart listens, for the sound of a cranking pipe organ, while a savvy monkey who knows his worth, quietly rakes in a small fortune.

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Date: 11/23/2023 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "The Last Organ Grinder" write. How much did he make??? Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
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Date: 11/23/2023 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, Rose! Your poem about the organ grinder is exquisitely written, showcasing intricate descriptions and masterful diction.
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Date: 11/22/2023 11:50:00 AM
A wonderful use of words and great storytelling. loved these lines: Thrown like a star into a vast sleep she opens her eyes to take a peek Gazing at tranquillity she falls in deep.. Congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 10/30/2023 3:09:00 PM
Nice poem.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/30/2023 3:15:00 PM
thank you for stopping by my poetry dear Hilda, will com and have a read on your page :)
Date: 10/29/2023 4:55:00 PM
a fabulous creation and a great contender for the contest. I'm in awe of your ability in using imagery so effectively. I remember the 'hurdy gurdy man' Not seen an organ grinder in decades. Anyway, I found this poem delightful yet sad at the same time. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 10/30/2023 8:28:00 AM
I have not met one in my days, but I can only imagine how pleasant it would be to hear one. I hope Silent One likes it too, Sara :) much love,Vie
Date: 10/29/2023 12:20:00 PM
A swoooosh through a time capsule, which has kept all its sound and beauty. It is bittersweet reading for me. Perhaps in another dimension, God keeps hold of all the beauty lost here. A lovely, touching, very visual read. Thank you, Vie! xoxo sally
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Date: 10/29/2023 1:03:00 PM
lol I do believe that God keeps tabs on all beauty lost and found and that he holds the key, if I were to go back through that time capsule, I'd make sure all kids were treated right Sally :)
Date: 10/29/2023 9:31:00 AM
I miss the organs that played in Malta. A very original Haibun. Pity it was destroyed. Blessings.
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Date: 10/29/2023 10:53:00 AM
I wish I lived in a time when they were still around, like the hot peanut cart its a thing of the past lol, thanks for reading V,
Date: 10/29/2023 6:20:00 AM
Ive been thinking of what to writ for the organ grinder contest, and here you come with such a brilliant creative and mellifluous take with excellent rhymes too and imagery! I am in awe and i feel the vibe and energy or the poem so strongly! I think silent one will like this one really. You’ve done an excellent job! Impressive! As always! With clever wordplay and concept! Goodluck for the contest.
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Date: 10/29/2023 10:52:00 AM
It was not an easy one to write for, lol, lots of research went into it, but it was fun, can't wait to read your entry dear heart, gl with it, love and light :)
Date: 10/29/2023 5:37:00 AM
You brought the show to the fore with vivid imagery, Vienna. Sad, this form of entertainment is long gone. Splendid recall!
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Date: 10/29/2023 10:52:00 AM
I wish I lived in the olden days sometimes, to enjoy such music and such magical eras of old :)

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