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The Last One

As I look at you lovely one With the slight blush from the sun The touch of gold is the magic That draws many to taste of The lusious fruit That could be tragic If once bitten find That the other side Is smitten with a place That is hidden The other side is brown, Soft, off scented, rotten The last peach why Did this have to happen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/4/2009 1:42:00 PM
Oh... How Much Like Real Life... very akin to common experiences MoonBee
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Date: 9/4/2009 12:49:00 PM
Peachy write Sara, delicious and juicy>>James
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Date: 9/3/2009 6:34:00 AM
illusions of golden lusciousness when in reality a hidden core of rotten peach awaits one who dares to bite. Reminds me of Eve and her apple. Take a bite and learn of dire consequences. Beautiful write Sara. Offers a lot for me to ponder:) -Yoni
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Date: 9/3/2009 5:41:00 AM
Sara, what an amazing write you have presented here today. Keep your pen flowing my friend. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/3/2009 4:08:00 AM
here you show your depth as a poet by this contenplative composition.i took a big bite of both sides.........o
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