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The Last Mile, Edited

Bright pole star promised me, it’d take me through rough sea to dream island of mine where sunburst dawn will shine, mind’ll absorb twilight gleam, soul’ll soak silk of moonbeam, but dark sky falls meanwhile, wrecked, I walk the last mile. March 17, 2020 Syllable count : 6 each line Checked on howmanysyllables.com Theme # 1 Contest : Alexandrine-Modified Sponsor : Dear Heart

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Date: 3/27/2020 9:54:00 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my contest, beautiful and dark, just the way I like it _Constance
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Date: 3/26/2020 2:41:00 AM
A wonderful entry this is Subimal! Congratulations on your top win! xxoo
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Date: 3/25/2020 10:53:00 PM
Subimal, great poem and a big congratulations on your win in Dear Heart’s Alexamdrine contest-. Hugs Eve
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