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The Last Mile

Across life’s topography I follow fate’s footprints. Many streams in spate I swim in storm with hopes held close to heart, lest they drown. Chase beguiled butterflies in the verdant valley. Dreams fly through rainbow arc, streaks of the setting sun wrap me with rapture, in my meadow I see dewdrops dazzle like love. As the spent sun sinks with lingering trace of twilight, I walk the last mile, until the time is up.

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Date: 12/14/2024 9:19:00 PM
Congrats on placing 9th out of 45 entries! Sorry it took so long to judge. Long story short my laptop would not and still does not accept the poetrysoup login screen. I'm doing this all on my phone just to get it judged. Regardless I loved your wordplay, amazing opening line with "life's topography."
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/16/2024 7:52:00 AM
Thank you, Matt for the placement. I understand your problem that can be quite frustrating.

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