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The Last Leaf

I smile at myself for being so sentimental, but how lonely it looks - the last leaf on the cherry tree. Its countless companions who shared and hung together through months of heat, furious winds and battering hail, have all let go. And you, the solitary survivor now, hangs as a sad reminder of all that was, the vigor that once swelled a sweetness through an abundant crop. Shall I take pity and pluck you from the branch, or just let be, until one cold morning I'll find you gone and a bare, leafless cherry tree.

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Date: 4/25/2024 5:12:00 PM
a poignant and subtly written metaphorical poem. Your poems are such a joy to read for your words offer up our shared humanity--the letting go is so hard. Had to do that with my dad after his stroke--could no longer walk, talk, or use his right arm...the physically diminished man was, however, a courageous warrior and hero to the end. Have a great evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/26/2024 5:35:00 AM
Hi Sara, the sad circumstances that confronted your father must have been challenging and emotionally almost unbearable...my sympathies. You do me a great honor by seeing a shared humanity in my poetry....you can pay me no higher compliment my dear Sara, a treasured gift. Thankyou.
Date: 4/25/2024 5:58:00 AM
A very poignant poem, beautifully written. My mother died recently, with dementia. You have captured that feeling too. The last goodbye - timely, but still sad. On another note, glad to find someone else in Autumn in Australia :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/25/2024 7:03:00 AM
So sorry to hear of your mother's passing Jeanette, difficult time. The letting go process comes with a mix of feelings, some float the mind without being given a name. Indeed appreciate your comments Jeanette. And yes Autumn is well and truly working its palette and minimalist agenda here in Melbourne. Take care....
Date: 4/25/2024 3:17:00 AM
How do you do it Paul!? I care deeply for that leaf now... :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/25/2024 6:51:00 AM
Ah !...maybe it's a little more than a leaf. Good to hear that it snuck into your lovely mind DD....thankyou for giving it some time. Take csre....Paul

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