The Last Leaf

A grey, lonely leaf sighs holding a stem Sobbing, and pleading to let him remain — To stay, a day more, to see sun's next dawn. My guru, an uncle, a beacon - gem, My guiding star, I saw — in biting pain, Keep on Trying to hold his breath, feebly clinging To my hands as dying doe to a pawn, Pleading — yet not knowing it is as vain As Fall's last leaf that tries farewell singing By swan.
Syllabic count: 10 syllables from line 1-5 and from line 7 – 10 and 2 syllables on line 2 and 11. Rhyming scheme: abc; abc; dcb, dc *7th Place (out of 10) in the following contest (judged on Dec. Feb, 3, 2021) Dec. 1, 2020 The Last 1 Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco *A 1st Place Win* in the following contest (judged on Nov. 21, 2020) Nov. 5, 2020 The Speaker Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

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Date: 2/3/2021 2:52:00 PM
Newton, a big CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 2/3/2021 6:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice, for the congrats on this placement!!
Date: 11/22/2020 5:57:00 PM
I am back with my congrats. Yours is one of the most poignant of the winners.
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Date: 11/23/2020 12:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for the congratulations and the lovely comment!!
Date: 11/21/2020 6:30:00 PM
Back to congratulate you Newton on your win with this heart-rending write, well done... Belle
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Date: 11/23/2020 12:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Belle, for this this sweet comment and the congratulations!!
Date: 11/21/2020 2:18:00 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest. I appreciate you taking the time and writing this nice event from your life. Sara
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Date: 11/23/2020 12:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara, for this immensely great comment and the placement!!
Date: 11/14/2020 9:55:00 AM
A very moving Curtal Sonnet Newton, so well written. Best of luck for the contest... Belle
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Date: 11/14/2020 3:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Belle, for this lovely comment!!
Date: 11/9/2020 10:01:00 AM
Great imagery of the lonely last leaf Newton. ~ Ani
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Date: 11/9/2020 10:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anitha, for this sweet comment!!
Date: 11/5/2020 3:13:00 PM
beautiful imagery in your curtail sonnet. So nice!
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Date: 11/5/2020 3:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this sweet comment!!
Date: 11/5/2020 1:41:00 PM
Newton, your poignant pen sighs upon the page as it stirs emotions with deeply moving imagery drawn with your unique and exquisite artistry. Melancholy beauty.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/5/2020 1:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, for this immensely great comment and the complement!!
Date: 11/5/2020 11:58:00 AM
Hello Newton Arch, when the leaves fall one by one to the ground, they spread out. When the wind blows the remaining leaves fall off. Leaving the tree bare. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/6/2020 12:08:00 PM
Hello Newton Arch, you are so welcome my friend.
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Date: 11/5/2020 1:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Derlene, for immensely great comment!!
Date: 11/5/2020 11:36:00 AM
- Oh, beautiful and touching poem Newton - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/5/2020 1:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this beautiful comment!!
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