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The Last Good-Bye

How do I let you go? I think we will together grow old. Your soul grew to my soul. As the clock chimes, becoming one in a lifetime. Years together spent. On a great journey we have went. Laughing, crying, walking, talking, touching, dreaming, together forever those thoughts beaming. Always together never alone. Now we must go alone. I will carry this life for the both of us. I will go alone. Good-bye my love.
9/23/18

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Date: 12/16/2018 4:03:00 PM
Hi Wren, You have penned a "goodbye" from the heart. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/16/2018 4:12:00 PM
Thank you Alexis for your kind words. Have wonderful evening my friend.
Date: 12/16/2018 11:53:00 AM
Perhaps it's not goodbye, only till we meet again. Congrats on your win.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/16/2018 12:13:00 PM
I agree DM, one day we will see our loved ones once again. Have a blessed day my friend. Thank you.
Date: 12/16/2018 11:52:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Wren ... so deeply touching and lovely :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/16/2018 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine! Have wonderful Sunday!
Date: 12/16/2018 11:09:00 AM
Touching poem that makes the heart feel for you.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/16/2018 11:44:00 AM
Thank you S1! I wrote it thinking of when my father lost my mother and how lonely he was without her. Now they are reunited in heaven again. Thanks again for hosting the contest.

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