The Last Dance

Forty three years of marriage and still you make my heart beat strong 
I never wanted to be anything else but your wife and loving song 
Together we walked, jogged and trotted but most of all we danced,  
to the rhythm of our first hello.  Every loving act was a show of love;   
When we were young we danced between sleepless nights and drank    
the brew of life as if it were a fox trot of maelstrom haze;  
Then the kids left home and we found ourselves alone again, 
Phonographic unused cylinders of time  crooned  again
with love songs from Edith Piaf;
You wrapped your arms around my waist and gave me a beginners taste  
Life had been good to us but oh how we lived it in such haste...,
Then we got a second chance, and we did it just so 
losing ourselves on the living room floor, 
we danced like newly weds on their wedding day; 
That was the last time we danced together without goodbyes,    
today all I own is an old phonograph, and yesterday's slow sighs. 

July 13,  2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 10:30 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 3:52 AM
Gorgeous poem, wonderful photo. Congrats on POTD!
Daniel Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 3:00 AM
Touching poem, Mystic, congratulations on POTD:)
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July 16, 2021 at 3:54 AM
Sweet friend and poetess Mystic Rose, what a great delight seeing you relishing in the honour of a well deserved recognition! Congratulations on your POTD honour! A poetry worthy to be praised and highly appreciated! My warmest wishes. Deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
Alex Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 1:57 AM
Phonographic unused cylinders of time Beautiful. Congratulations!
Mcintosh Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 11:54 PM
Congrats!!! Still love this awesome write. God bless you, Love, Gina
Doll Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 7:46 PM
Rose, beautiful, well written. Sometime memories are all we have to cherish. Congratulations on POTD~ Warren
Nicole Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 7:05 PM
"All I own is an old phonograph, of the last time we danced" This is beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Memories last a lifetime. Congratulations Mystic Rose, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
Fenn Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 3:30 PM
What a great poem about a wonderful marriage! Congrats on POTD!
Merryman Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 2:51 PM
An enchanting, romantic write, Vie! Congrats on your POTD honor! Blessings, Kim M.
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July 15, 2021 at 2:33 PM
You certainly write some beautiful poems Rose, this one literally sweeps the reader of their feet, how you do it time after time is staggering, can only be testament to the full life you have lived, congratulations on another POTD, cheers David
Watt Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 2:01 PM
Rose, this is a beautiful tribute to your lifelong love and soul mate, with wonderful music references. Your ending is purely magical and truly poignant. Congratulations on your POTD ~ John
Scragg Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 1:38 PM
Mystic Rose Rose, this is so so beautiful! Not only has is got the flow and rhythm of a dance but the sentiment is out of this world. Thank you for sharing this. Truly touching.
Theraven Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 12:55 PM
Mystic Rose Rose, Somewhere I hear Edith singing 'Non, Je ne regrette rien. 'That was the last time we danced together without goodbyes, today all I own is an old phonograph, and yesterday's slow sighs.' Life is beautiful, holding on to best memories through poetry. -Richard
Michael Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 12:14 PM
Congratulation Mystic Rose on your dance of life...and on POTD. Such sweetness does come by every day.
La France Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 11:04 AM
Mystic, beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor ~ love and serenity _Constance
Jayasankar Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 11:02 AM
So beautifully penned and hearty congrats on your deserving POTD dear Mystic Rose... Hugs... ~ Ani
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July 15, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Gorgeous penning! Congratulations on POTD! xomo
Seeker Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 9:29 AM
Superbo! Congrats on POTD, Mystic Rose
Hankins Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 9:15 AM
A beautiful write, Mystic Rose Rose. Enjoyed it immensely. Congratulations on your POTD!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful yet sad story/write. Life and love can be very hard. Have a blessed day...............
Kaufman Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 8:12 AM
a very beautiful and touching piece. I am so sad for your loss but was happy to hear how you both danced and danced and danced.
May Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 8:03 AM
Beautiful yet sad, Congrats on POTD Vie..
Roper Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 7:52 AM
Beautiful , Mystic Rose, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Sands Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 6:53 AM
Congratulations for POTD. Beautiful :)
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